All Comments on 'Hotwife in Training'

I normally eschew the hot wife stories, but I am glad I gave this one a read. I look forward to additional chapters. Well-written. The most significant error was switching from past tense to present tense. (I suggested to JD... He agrees to it...)

I'll wait for the next parts to vote and comment....I just hope the story gets better....for now is weak...

I enjoyed it x Thought it was a very good and descriptive start x keep going and ignore the usual anonymous haters x x

There are some reasons to like this story; namely, a slutty girlfriend who is eager to suck and fuck, both for her own pleasure and her boyfriend's.

Unfortunately, I found more reasons not to like this story. As others have pointed out already, there is no wife in this story, which not only means it is miscategorized, but it removes the "taboo" factor from the plot. The constant changes from past to present tense, as another mentioned already, are distracting, as are the paragraphs that are far too long.

Given that this is your first story, though, I'm willing to forgive you for all of that. What I can't forgive is the reference to yet another nine (and a half!) inch cock. I'm just so tired of reading stories where every male character has an enormous Johnson that is nearly twice as long as the average. And why does every writer include that extra half inch? It drives me insane.

Anyway, you have the foundation for a decent story here, but you need to work on the execution a little. It's not quite ready for primetime, IMHO.

it would be neat if this lifestyle let her find someone else. These stories tend not to have any consequences. I've talked to a former hot wife who left her husband for someone else. city boy to her being a country girl, she found another man who love raising horses as much as she does. So, it will be interesting if she found someone else. Tension and depth of characters makes a story interesting. Otherwise, this is just another stroke story without any meaning besides for the sex scenes.

Being a real hotwife that started as a hotgirlfriend, I like your story because I lived something similar. So keep going and tell us how was your start. Thanks

Not married

I am writing this on behalf on my girlfriend. The person who shared our experiences in way of a story for our pleasure. I thought id share it here as I've enjoyed many other stories I've read here.

It's a little hard to change parts of "story" as it as all fact so I don't know what more she could do about that ?

To the person hoping she meets someone else,

What the hell is that meant to mean? I sincerely hope and expect that she won't.

As far as not being married goes, it is stated in the title. It seems you guys are tougher on what constitutes "married" than the law is,

Maybe you would prefer a segment for defacto relationships ?

always a tricky topic/genre this one ,

& tbh the better its written the more negative feedback & comments the Author gets.

its often said that there are alot of repressed readers that get off on & love/hate

the thought of thier wife/partner fucking lots of men with thier approval

that they suck up the story , get thier rocks off & then feel guilty & Flame the Author.

its also said that there are alot of readers recovering from failed marriages/relationships

where thier wife/partner cheated on them & betrayed them badly , & that these guys are drawn like a moth to the flame / fly to the spiders web ... by these type of storys ,

idk why but some pple in anguish ,read this genre to feel even more pain.

go figure....

bottom line , the better the Author writes on this subject ... the more Hate Mail & flaming they get ... so best bet is to not read the negative feedback in any detail.

just tell yourself this: "i got to them , i stirred their emotions"

mission accomplished.

great 1st story , look forward to reading more about your adventures .

always remember ..

nobody is forcing anyone to read your tales ,

if they don't like it

THEN THEY CAN STOP READING IT

Is this Melissa writing this story?

More please!

Ok JD is excited about you sucking cock... So how is JD going to be kinkier? Does he get any new pussy to play with? Or is the hotwife in training just a selfish bitch that wants lots of cock for herself but can't stand the thought of JD looking at another woman?

I'm married for 23 years and my wife is seeing a lot of a male friend of ours who she had sex with two years ago but then stopped as it got too messy and an emotional attachment complicated things. Now she just sees him for walks and coffee with my consent but there's no intimate touching or anything like that going on. Quite honestly, I am subtly training her to be a hotwife and am encouraging her to see as much of him as she wants. It definitely seems to be working as we have gotten to the stage where we openly talk about his obvious desire for her which she likes as he is 14 years younger than her. I don't want her to have a twosome though with him as that didn't work out well before but I am hoping for a really hot MFM. I am really turned on by the thought of watching my wife being naked with another man and allowing him do anything he wants to her. I fantasize about him really fucking her hard right in front of me, i want her to suck his cock and lick his balls and would love to watch him wank off and jerk his load off all over my wifes lovely face. The image of her lovely face being covered with his hot semen and seeing a big satisfied smile on her face is such a massive turn on. I'm not sure if it will work out but the thing is, is that I'm not pushing it but thankfully he's totally 'going for it' as he's contacting her daily at this stage and starting to get bolder with the flirting. He's married himself and loves his wife (who is stunning) and understandably (Ithink) would love to have a female friend that he could have really hot sex with on the side . I'd love to watch him use my wife as his 'Fucktoy' and i would love to watch her being a total slut with another man. Anyway, we'll see how it goes. The story above with that woman and her boyfriend JD is really hot. JD is a lucky man

Yeah, sure

Not really a whorewife, or a wife yet. Can boyfriend be an official cuck.

RE: "Lost Me At 9 1/2 inches

Yeah, sure"

Just because you're less than 4" doesn't mean everyone else is too.