All Comments on 'Hotwife Takes Three, Husband Watches'

by ncontendre

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nope

About as bad as it gets. Just another cum dumpster and loser husband.

wandereyewandereyeabout 6 years ago
Edit

You really need to proofread and check for errors.

OPrimeOPrimeabout 6 years ago
Hold you Nose

Cuck stuff

Impo_64Impo_64about 6 years ago
Just a question...

Just a question...What are "married panties"? 1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

Forest18cForest18cabout 6 years ago
Nope

Try to find an editor or proof read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
not good enough to even be called rubbish

badly written and full of grammatical errors. Back to the drawing board

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
LET IT BE ME

Love to be the husband/cuckold. Do clean up on her with my mouth and the guys before they leave. YUM YUM YUM

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I see the Impo-64 shit show continues

I’ll is just great is sbrooks is just8 reading is gordo12 is gman57 is miss brooks and every lame ass anonymous comment on these stories. He is a closet cocksucking cuck wannabe who is upset that he can’t be the one sucking the cum out of a woman.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
up until

you became a faggot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Author.....

You do realize that humiliation and creampie eating are fetishes right? No vote. It denigrates the one this deserves

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
The only gay one here is Impo64

And all of his lame assed aliases and his sad little anonymous comments. Keep posting good slut wife stories and the masses will enjoy them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Impo64 is a closet cuck

closet gay as well maybe, but certainly pure cuck

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchabout 6 years ago
Hi Nolo, seems like this is a fantasy you get off on, especially the abusive wife

Trouble is even most of us who are OK with HotWives and sharing are not going to like it when portrayed like this.

As you have now seen, you will get hammered in the score, and yes due to the butt plug and creamy coercion, it probably belongs in fetish or BDSM.

Sorry mate, and thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Boy does

it suck... so bad it sucked all the stars into the Universal Black Hole. 0.000

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Pay absolutely zero attention to the negative comments

They are all done by the same gay assed troll. He can’t even be original in all of posts. What a pathetic LOSER to waste your days whining about fictional stories. LOSER

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Learn to spell!

You spelling needs help. Get a second grader to proof your stuff.

patilliepatillieabout 6 years ago
Oh good Lord

that is so bad, the typo's, mispellings, lack of coherent train of thought. Combine that with a main character who is sexually deviant and craves humiliation and degradation then you get these crappy scores. This is def a troll post, you did good to get as many comments as you did.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Really bad!

Typos. Spelling. Grammar. "omg" is not a good writer habit. The premise is good. The execution leaves a lot to be desired. Don't ever use omg ever again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I wish

How i wish my wife would do this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Simply unreadable

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I wish my husband would let me gangbang

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great - lucky wife and lucky husband - all cumming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

My wife enjoyed it and is now very wet - I must lick her clean

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