by JamesRiver
A very good read with such potential for a continued evolution and growth of the characters, my concerns are, the author will choose not to proceed further.
Especially both of them being together forever and the possibility of the mom getting knocked up!
hows come everyone wants to knockup their moms and sisters cant they just enjoy the sex????????
He is a university graduate with his own IT business and a successful web app. He sells the business, moves home, sets him mom up to take computer courses online, and he enrolls in a massage therapy course? Better yet, he spends months in classes, doesn't own a massage table, and never once uses his mother to practice the lessons for class? How did mom do in her classes? All we know about those months is take out dinners and evenings watching movies on TV.
I took three different massage courses and would not have been able to complete the first section without a table and a volunteer practice partner.
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Please add a second chapter. I can see a lot of ways this story can go.
Would like to see Part 2 where one of them commits a crime and gets house arrest again...
Will she reconnect with her siblings and where will they move to, how many kids do they have.
That's like working for Microsoft Corporation then getting a job at McDonalds! LOL!!!