All Comments on 'House Guest'

by jgrdnrls24

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Good story line

But I did have a problem with your female character sucking his cock right after he had been plowing her ass. Maybe its just me though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Well-written

There were a few spots that could use more detail, such as surroundings and such. But otherwise it's a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
more detail!!

the anal had very little detail im sorry but damn otherwise the story was very good

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
They may have worked out their problems in the beginning

but there are lots more now.

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