All Comments on 'House Hunting Ch. 03'

I loved the story but you dont say what the character Carla looks like in the stoey you say what Linda and Kris look like but nothing about Carla like her breast size or her height or any thing else you seem to concentrate on the main ones Linda and Kris and your spelling needs to be checked better your fingers are skipping all over the key board try looking at the words your typing on the paper it will help and a editor should check the work before you submit you work into Literotica.

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga