All Comments on 'HouseKeeping Ch. 09'

Really enjoying the series

Great descriptions of the women

Why do you keep switching from first person to third person? It will say I'm getting a hard on and in the next sentence or in the same sentence you say Todd really liked this. Or you switch from I to him in a sentence. It's distracting.

I bet it was written in the third person and re edited using word search. A bit irritating but hey its a good story. I havent read back but I am fairly sure initially Kelsey said her husband hooked up with his secretary.