All Comments on 'HouseKeeping Ch. 13'

...in what was turning into a pretty wonderful love story. I felt a sense of loss reading about the piss-ant contest at the end and enormous anger and disappointment at Todd not stopping them (at least before she gave permission). What Todd and Kelsey did, was an act of love; what the piss-anus did were acts of degradation. But then again, you might have meant it that way, plot device-wise.

Greg, Tim and José deserve a swift kick in the nuts IMO. But then again, not everyone might agree with me. I just hope you will save this story.

...read piss-ants. :)

where are 4..7,,11 chapters.?