All Comments on 'How Are Mine?'

Good premise.

But sex is rushed.

Needed more details of foreplay/preliminaries.

Needed some mutual masturbation of each other.

Four stars.

Hot, fun and straightforward, thanks

A gorgeous fantasy with beautiful people - not buffed 'n' bouncing pornstars. Loved the outdoors & exhibitionism, the gentleness, the Art references - but maybe Goya or Manet's Olympia are more endowed than Botticelli's ladies!

Best of all is the assertive woman, not controlled by her man's desires (like Olympia).

Five stars, for sure.

Loved it.

I would consider marrying that lady if I were him

...next? It's a shame to lose sight of our two protagonists.

Very well written, by the way--thanks!

Not bad. Really enjoyed it. One thing, though. Don't refer to it as the "twig".

@DoktahZ

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Perfect

Nice pacing, decent story, hot sex. Well done.

.......straight up. Doesn't make sense.

Sexy, sexy but flawed.

... c'mon - all the usual cliches have been rounded up. A woman in her mid (or later) twenties with no sexual experience gropes a friend with whom she has had a long and purely platonic relationship; she invites him to grab her tits, which he does, to the satisfaction of both (it's pretty clear our boy was going places no man had gone before) and so on She gives her first hand job, followed by her first blow job - the guy's refractory time (for somebody his age - presumably the same as hers) is remarkable, and then they fuck - no discomfort at being penetrated in a new place -

anyway, the author's choice of words and pace provides compensation for the effort I needed to maintain the necessary suspension of disbelief. By changing a relatively few words the author could make a splendid erotic couplings story out of this

Very nice, extremely well written. Agree with earlier comment.

5 stars

Story, a pleasure to read just a man and woman making love, no huge cock or tits and no anal.

Is she going to tell him she was a virgin and he was her first? He will love that she gave him this gift.