by lilkitten000
I like how he is gentle with her. Five stars and want to see more soon.
thank you for showing that a Daddy Dom is not just a regular Dom who is being called "Daddy" because he ordered his sub to say that
Being a Daddy Dom is NOT about just being an abusive selfish asshole ... a "lil girl" is a precious treasure, her submission is a gift given to someone who will cherish that gift and treat her like the treasure she is ... she is NOT just another piece of meat to be used/abused and then tossed away
I think this was well written but a little too short. I hope there is more to come. It is very different to read that the Daddy Dom is not demanding but more caring and gentle. He gave her the opportunity to back out and he also checked in with her to see that she was okay at least until he entered her and then her actions told him she was fine. I would like to read more of this and how this relationship develops so I hope this was not a one shot short story but the start of a few submissions.
I think this was well written but a little too short. I hope there is more to come. It is very different to read that the Daddy Dom is not demanding but more caring and gentle. He gave her the opportunity to back out and he also checked in with her to see that she was okay at least until he entered her and then her actions told him she was fine. I would like to read more of this and how this relationship develops so I hope this was not a one shot short story but the start of a few submissions.
Short and simple yet packed with emotion and lust. I could practically feel her earth shattering orgasm.
I agree, a bit too short. Also I feel the title doesn't match the story. The story doesn't tell how and where he actually found her.