by SubmissiveRomantic
I agree with hotrod26808. The ending ruined it. It would have been fine had they been stepsiblings, but as it is now, it's a bridge to far and it ruined a good story.
...made the author a favorite. I think I might have read it quite a while back but am not sure. I, too, did not care for the ending but did not let it influence my general impression of the story. No one pleases everyone. It pleased me a lot to read the whole story.
It wasn't to bad until the ending. Really? Brother and sister boxing against one another? The sister just happens to be the better boxer just like her mother and will get to fuck her brother, just because they are home schooled? What BS!
Me, I would of just cleaned out my locker before the beating took place. Left the gym NEVER to return there or talk to anyone from there again.
I wouldn't say the ending RUINED it, but it was pretty fuckin good before ...
Now I just gotta say "Not Bad!"
And why didn't her husband have her arrested for beating the hell out of him?
If it'd been the other way around there'd have been such a hue and cry.
Meh
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