All Comments on 'How Do You Seduce Your Daughter?'

Your dialog between father and daughter left a lot to be desired. The whole conversation bounced back and forth predictably with Oh Daddy and Oh God. Your description of the sex act however was very erotic and noteworthy

. . . but would have been much better and more erotic if the daughter hadn’t had such a limited vocabulary. 3*

but after that, it got old with the ins and outs and oh gods then daddy's slut over and over that didn't need to be repeated over and over also the thing with the glasses having to keep fixing them should have just taken them off so I gave the story 3 stars.

.........but then disintegrated into just another quite adolescent story. "Daddy" and "slut" way overdone to the point of annoyance.

Ugh. This trend of seducing your daughter only to end up treating her like shit is so old and boring. Come on authors. So a woman enjoys sex as much as the man, that makes her a slut? The fathers desire to finally after years of seduction is to debase it all in a few short stokes and his loving daughter is no better than some street walking crack whore? Enough already.

Agree with the comments about repeat, repeat, repeat, so maybe rated it a star or two higher than should. But, has potential for expansion, with friend Lindsey and lover Ashley waiting in the wings. What about Lindsey's father?

I guess the daughter asked to be talked to that way because she caught him doing that with his friend, I liked the start but not so much the end part. My step daughter is the one I dream about and wish I could get her to sit on my lap because I get hard every time she comes over for a visit. She would certainly feel my cock, and as she is single now she is not getting any loving. I would love to eat her pussy every day for a whole year. Enough about me, continue the story please sounds like a good start so far, maybe bring in one of her girl friends or boy friends maybe daddy would also like to suck cock, I would. da.cd@frontier.com

Big negative---not a virgin.

Small sex

It's "taut," not "taunt." I wouldn't have mentioned it, but you said it about ten times.

thoroughly enjoyed! l love that the sex was drawn out, too often these stories end a great build up with what feels like a two minute quickie. Not so much of a build up here but the details made up for it. Will wait impatiently for the next chapter >.<

I was enjoying it until she asked him to talk nasty to her and call her a slut. From that point on it went down hill. The only words in the story became "Daddy's slut" and "Ooh Daddy". Couldn't even finish the story.

TAUT not TAUNT,LOLLING not LULLING. "Oh God,Daddy,Slut" waaaay overdone. It made a grammatically challenged,repetitive read,and thus made it less enjoyable.

Slut

Daddy’s slut

uhm Slut

it gets old

First part was good though. It should have continued that line of writing.

God I want my daughter so fucking bad, and she knows it and still she hasn't told anyone and she has walked in on me smelling her dirty underwear and jacking off and I mean it, I want her to cum all over my dick because she will love it I know and I love your story. Damn I even want you right now in my daughter's bedroom with her. I want her to be a slut for all kinds of guys and I invite guys over all the time and she doesn't fuck them so how can I get her to??

i wish my daddy would seduce me and fuck me like a little slut ;)

I agree with others who said the dialogue was not so good. Calling one's daughter a slut, etc., over and over is not the way it is or should be. Otherwise, it could be even more exciting.

It was an amazing story until it got to all of the ‘slut, slut, slut’ bs. Why oh why take it there?? May as well go all the way and call the daughter a dirty little whore too. I’m mean, why not? What’s stopping you from taking the daughter’s debasement all the way? Yuck.

Amazingly hot!!! Sequel please!