All Comments on 'How I Became a Nudist Ch. 01'

I think it would have been much better without the introduction. By stating up front that the characters are "not meant to be realistic", you immediately take away from the story. I appreciate your honesty and understand if your intent is to not offend true nudists. The statement about you not wanting to blow farm animals was also unnecessary.

Having said that, the final paragraphs were very exciting. You fantasized about being totally naked and allowing others to see every inch of your body. The fantasy is not unrealistic. I am looking forward to your next story.

a nice start....and then?

And long enough to be an opening paragraph. Where's the story?

But not funny. I'll keep reading...

I'm really intrigued by this character, and what you have so far is pretty well written. But I hope there's more coming (you call it Chapter 1 so that's a good sign) because there's not really much of a story with her yet. Looking forward to more!

Please ignore previous comment. It was intended for a different story.

This was very fun and sexy. It may have been published years ago, but I'd still love to read more.

I found this story because I was searching for Cerina Vincent stories. She's so beautiful, I'm really surprised there aren't more erotic stories written about her.

Have you ever seen her in the movie "Cabin Fever"? She doesn't do the same level of nudity as she did in "Not Another Teen Movie" in that one, but you do get to see her screwing some lucky guy's brains out - seriously, she's a freaking sex machine in that movie. IMHO, watching her put that amazing body to good use is a hundred times hotter than watching her catwalking it through a high school.

I love her sex scene in "Cabin Fever", because she is just so hot and horny and uncompromising with the guy she fucks. I write fanfictions about them, trying to recreate the chemistry between those characters, because it's the best sexual chemistry I've ever seen on film.

I found this story because I was searching for Cerina Vincent stories. She's so beautiful, I'm really surprised there aren't more erotic stories written about her.

Have you ever seen her in the movie "Cabin Fever"? She doesn't do the same level of nudity as she did in "Not Another Teen Movie" in that one, but you do get to see her screwing some lucky guy's brains out - seriously, she's a freaking sex machine in that movie. IMHO, watching her put that amazing body to good use is a hundred times hotter than watching her catwalking it through a high school.

I love her sex scene in "Cabin Fever", because she is just so hot and horny and uncompromising with the guy she fucks. I write fanfictions about them, trying to recreate the chemistry between those characters, because it's the best sexual chemistry I've ever seen on film.