All Comments on 'How I Became a Sex Slave Ch. 02'

hi, your off to a great start, what you just wrote can happen to anybody, looking forward to your next chapter.

OK, so far you've painted a vivid picture of the dark side of erotica. The characters are believable. I've known a few that are like them. I would seriously advise using spellcheck or getting editing help. The misspellings detract from the story like the spikes the cops throw down detract from car tires.

That said, the story is entertaining. I'll give the sequels a try.