All Comments on 'How I Fell In Love Ch. 05'

I dont know if I like this one.

Aiden is confusing in that he first wants to hurt her to the point that he wants her to cry, to beg and to call him Sir. I am not really sure what makes him so angry but acting in anger in a scene is not healthy for either parties. Aiden admits he is a sadist and he doesn't want to lose her and then he tells her maybe she should leave him. I am confused.

As usual, I love it!!! It's been a long time coming, I know. But I can't wait for the next installment!

I blew off in the last para. Sometimes you get carried away while writing. I am an amateur writer- so these things happen.

Nevertheless, I am fixing my mistake in chapter 6, where I begin with the last scene all over again. It will be slightly different than what Aiden said and ... as to why Aiden snapped is something that will be revealed later on...

Thank you! It means a lot to know that people are readin' and not just to jack off!

While it is surely subjective, there is a difference between a sadist master and just an asshole jerk. It will be interesting to find out what is his damage. Also hope she's not all fawning forgiveness. Doms are accountable for their actions even more so than subs.