All Comments on 'How I Spent My Vacation'

Will true love win all? Stay tuned for future chapters.... ;-)

I enjoy a well written superhero story, and I think "Joe Average gets a hot superheroine" is a fantasy for a lot of us. You had some minor writing glitches but nothing too distracting. I hope you plan on some more chapters in Chuck and Shannon's romance

Hope there's more to come of this story, will Chuck get powers as well?

Hoping for a continuation of the story

I liked this one very much. Great start to what could become very rich characters. Fun playful story. Leaves possibilities for future stories. One of your best. Thank you.

I don't think anyone's been called a bozo in comics since 1970's Archie. You are writing for an adult audience so you can use the harsh names like nincompoop or dipstick without fear. You don't have to go full Alan Moore and have a character rape the invisible man to death before a dinner party, but you don't need to go Adam West Batman cutesy either.

Enjoyed this one. Very much in the mould of the action comics I read as kid.

(Minus the sex! Lol!)

Nice and simply told. A funny, imaginative, romantic little story!

Well done.

Part 2...?

Why is ROMANCE now being bombarded by rubbish that BELONGS in other categories.

Romance is being taken over because loving wives as turned into nothing but cuck stories

What happens if HE puts on the power belt? Does he become a Super-EMT or something... or weirder (and a whole lot kinkier!), does he turn into Dynamo Doll???

Fun story, but might have fit better in the “Sci-Fi & Fantasy” category.

I got about ten paragraphs in before I realized that this was some kind of fantasy science fiction crap. Then, I bailed. This is the section of Literotica I go to for romance stories. There is a different section for science fiction/fantasy stories. Please use it, next time.

So when does Riley Parkin show up? The title is not original.

Folks! Take this for what it is, a wonderfully spun tale. I totally enjoyed it. I wonder how a chance meeting in Major City between

EMT Chuck and Dynamo Doll/Shannon would go? Sort of Castle and Beckett?

I just watched the Incredibles 2 film last weekend, and this is so in tune with the Public SuperHero vs. the Private Family dynamic story line.

OK, so the Author has mis-categorised the story. How about the self-appointed Keepers of the True Filing System offer

some POLITE suggestions as to the Proper Category? We are supposed to act as adults here.

This is supposed to be a proving ground and sand box for aspiring writers to get something onto paper (OK, photons on an LCD screen).

Keep on writing, WIFETHEIF !!

Well worth a series

Needs a second part

I’ll be interested to see where you decide to take this.

Or not would be fine. It ends well.

T.

Your stories may be rather short sometimes but they are filled with well thought out themes, excellent characters and are well written while being entertaining and funny at times. A nice mix from a fine author.

Excellent story. Deserves additional chapters.

Wow... this was SO fun and awesome to read... i need more of this...

What a fun story, really enjoyed it!

I love the thought of DD showing up to Chuck in front of his ex and flying off with him, rubbing it in the ex’s nose

Cute