by swollenbell
all is well in your tale. It ended on a happy note. with your eyes wide open, you
knew the deal, took the deal and had a happy life. short happy tale. If only
life worked out for everyone that way. nice tale.
...it seemed rushed. There was enough detail to inform us, but the courtship, sex and relationship felt rushed. This could have been 4 pages and been a 4 or 5. What you have is good, but it just needs more fleshing out.
Written by a typical Japanophile... predictable except the part about moving to the US. That part really is fantasy.
I just added Japan to my list of countries to pick a girlfriend from
As a fantasy it’s cool but an average Japanese girl would do NONE of the things from the first night on, wouldn’t stay at a single males house, you’d have to court her for MONTHS to get an ‘I like you’, and sex??? Not happening for an age....
Delightful story. It reads like a documentary, conceptually, in modest details, and without contrived extravagances of most of the Lit tales. Perhaps one unique young girl escaping the cultural strangulation of an overbearing traditional society, mking the writer a very lucky dude to have discovered her and rescued her from Japanese traditionalism without having to ransom her from her family.
Nice story. Was stationed in the Far East and to me Asian women are exotic. Knew several guys that came home with Asian wives and they all had families.
Great Love Story One Hot Fuckiing Pussy Wionder how she would Like her Pussy ate to Orgam rw
Five Stars One Hot Puss that really Likes to Fuck. I wonder how she likes oral sex.RW