All Comments on 'How I Train My Bitch-Boys'

by bjmichaels

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smoothboismoothboialmost 12 years ago

This would turn me pretty easily.

buzzie1969buzzie1969almost 12 years ago
hot

very hot..... and sounds fun :-)

bluesky496bluesky496almost 12 years ago

what an amazing story, i would love to be the one being trained m i would love to read more i was so turned on all the way through .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
nice,

No drugs were needed for me, When I first saw his erect 9" I was his and could not be in a room with him without me being erect.

No woman had kept me so aroused ever and there had been many, I just could not keep my hands and mouth off him until he buried it into my rear and filled me with cum, or had his pals do the same.

Enjoyable read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
WOW!

This story had me hard from start to finish! When I finished the story I realized that my underwear was wet with precum! I think this story is particularly hot because the Master doesn't use physical or fear based training...it's just mental conditioning. That makes the Master much sexier.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
nice....

To the comment titled nice,

; WTF?!?!?!?

Yeah it's good btw lol.

Great read, had me hard start to finish. Hood thing Johnny was there for me. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Sweet

I want to be an older man's bitch-boy. If you're in your 40's or 50's please lest me know if you're interested. My cell number is 417 569 9984.

bluesky496bluesky496over 11 years ago

wow i was hard the who;e time i read this ,i want someone to train me like that

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
great story

I wish I had someone to train me like that when i was in my twenties!

I wouldn't want to be sold to just anyone though!

chesthairslavechesthairslavealmost 11 years ago
How to Get Ride of Pests

lol. That was pure delicious evil. I have a few nominations to make that need Peter's training.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Disappointing Ending

Rating would have been a 5, but the cruel ending caused a penalty point off.

Why the trafficking in human cargo? It is just wrong. See the movie "Taken."

You are an excellent writer, very descriptive. It was very erotic until your ending.

MaryJonMaryJonover 10 years ago
Ooooh..... Evil

Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
wonderful

Lovely story, would love to be the bitch

sedmwifsedmwifover 10 years ago
Outstanding

Nice writing, nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Creepily manipulative and cruel.

It would've been much hotter if Peter wasn't so... sociopathic. And I've never been a fan of Viagra/other drugs. Also, I really don't like stories where people are fired just to be made more dependent. The writing itself was hot, though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
eye opening

Incredible story, and an eye opener as well. I know realise how I was manipulated and converted. This is almost identical to what happened to me.

PaddlesPaddlesalmost 10 years ago
Wow

This is well written, makes me want to be just like johnny

FailedscoutFailedscoutabout 9 years ago
Very Good Story

I very rarely read in the Gay Male category but I am very happy that I read this one. Very good job and thank you for posting it.

daddysgagtoydaddysgagtoyabout 9 years ago
Straight and muscular

I'm muscular and "straight", but I wish a Daddy would train me to be his obedient sissy bitch-boy!

RodnBottomRodnBottomabout 9 years ago
Once Again Well Done- Very Sensual

Liked all of it, the training, the description of the oral and anal sex. Had me wishing I was Johnny.

Did not like the idea of Johnny being sold at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great Story

I loved the way you trained Johnny it much like I was trained. I don't care for the ending of him been sold off but overall I loved this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

i guess that's what gay rights have come down to: fapfaping to stories of young boys being drugged to be sold off into slavery later. bravo

randy72randy72about 8 years ago

This is in many ways the story of the life I wanted to live. I can only dream of how Pete could have made a better life for me than I've actually lived. Now I'm too old but within my core is a Johnny who wants to leave me behind to take his place at his Master's feet. You made me weep like the boy I am, Sir.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Rick

That you were planning to sell him - Are you out of your mind!!!!???????????? That part was disgusting!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Amazing!

I love your stories! They touch something inside of me that I am still in the process of figuring out. Especially enjoy when you sissify your characters. Would love it if you wrote a story set in a prison. I hope you keep on writing and looking forward to the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
good story

I am a male and I become a older man bitch boy it happen one day I was fooling around at his place and he told me if I did not stop and get back to work he would slap my ass I told him right if you think you can I not a kid he said no but you are been a bit of a sissy just then I turn and show my ass that when I told him as a joke you think you can take my pants down and slap my ass then I will be a sissy well he walk over grab me and he had my pants off fast then he put me over his knees and ripe my under wear of then he slap my ass hard it mush be ten time he did my ass was red then he said come with me we went into the house and he got some cream as he rub it on my ass it felt good I was close to his crotch and I saw he had a hard on I look at it again and his pants were open and his cock was out just then he move a little close to my face now I was face to his cock just then I felt his finger at my ass hole with some cream I lift my legs a bit when I did my lips was at his cock I open my mouth and he shove his cock in as I suck he work his finger in and out of my ass hole that when he told me that it bitch boy you suck cock good and I wonder how you like a big cock in that pussy ass of your he did not wait he just pull out and shove it in my ass hole just then he said that it bitch I knew you would like my cock I told him yes then you will be my bitch yes I told him well after that day I never work outside again I became his house maid and he had me in panties and blouse and skirt in the day time and night I was in a nightie soon I found my self trying on more girl clothes I even start to wear a bra then one day he ask me if I want to wear male clothes again I said no why you ask well I just want to see if you want to just then I walk over to him and said look you made me look like this are you not happy with me yes he said I am happy now lets take the next step you will be my girly bitch wife

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wow

What a cruel, disgusting ending. Grade A trolling...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
uniformed critics

To the critical comments about this story: I have trained a few "bitch boys" and it is imperative to remove them from a work environment to become 24/7 bitches. Too many negative influences from co-workers can have serious effects on their training. Total dependence on their master is required to maintain an obedient, content bitch. And, while I do not use drugs in my training, I do not see a problem with the way they were used in this story as training aids. As for the ending, a truly well trained bitch wants only to please its master and if they're sold to make way for a new bitch, they would not object. This is part of being a bitch. I have sold two of my bitches for a sizeable sum- enough to purchase a large house. One of the bitches I sold was a dear childhood friend who I turned after his divorce. I made him realize his marriage was a sham and turned him later in life. Even though he was over 40 when I sold him, he brought top-dollar due to the quality of his training. I replaced him with his younger brother who is without a doubt the prettiest bitch I have ever seen. I can never imagine replacing him but if that ever occurred it would be without the bitch complaining and I'm sure he would sell for more than the other two bitches combined. To the author, this was a well written, informative story.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The key is chemical redirection of excitement

One has to be a kind of model of masculinity in order to have a young man be worshipful of one. So think of all of the characters that testosterone brings out in a man, and that' who you should be in order to train a submissive. Then, Peter's use of Viagra was very cunning. A 20-year old is naturally easily aroused sexually, so one has to make him even more aroused when the masculine model is around. The sexual transformation from independent male to dependent fem doesn't need the cock strap, it can easily be achieved just by timing the Viagra so that the submissive is most sexually excited precisely when he is performing passively: getting the sub ready to be fucked. The commentators who disliked the ending are right--being sold to a person from another culture is not likely to have a good outcome, and is "trafficking" in any case. The sex with the neighbors Greg and Amy is unreal also--

one suspects that the author, B, J. Michaels, who certainly knows how to write, was fading a bit and improvised a weak ending. A stronger ending would have been to share Johnny with another dom who could expand horizons for Johnny: a Dom with a bigger penis, who would give him longer and more frequent fuckings in return for a worshipful attitude toward both doms.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Ah ... no.

Makes a good read once ... but only once. First, Viagra just gets you hard. It doesn't create sexual excitement. Viagra also has immediate negative side-effects which can be distracting. Next, male orgasms are inherently hard to remember so they make for very poor rewards in a conditioning program. Finally, "Johnny" doesn't make sense. He's supposedly straight, well-mannered and desirable yet nobody seems to be looking out for him. NOT likely. The only plausible punch in this story is Peter's high-octane sociopathic charisma. That IS a real-world threat but easily recognized in the Internet age.

Real bitch-boys aren't "Johnnys". The real thing are typically the youth nobody cares about: dirt-poor & uneducated, mentally ill, retarded, or otherwise throwaway (usually gay) lads without personal charm or sophistication. The exception are the youths used as field hands on Central and Latin American drug farms. These boys are either bought or kidnapped by drug- traffickers and forced to severe drug-addiction past the point of permanent brain damage. Rather than being sexy or desirable, the behavior of these mutilated lads more closely resembles cattle. They also have a tendency to neglect their personal hygiene. Even among the narcos, fucking one of these is viewed as as despicable.

StryWrter7StryWrter7about 4 years ago
Difficult to read

You switch back and forth - who the "I" character is in your story ..if its written from the sub point of view .. or the dom point of view ... constantly changing back and forth .. its OK to say Peter said "I want you to feel this way" -- but you fluctuate too much to make the story flow !! Your conversation does not include who's saying it - frequently enough to follow along !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
This is my favorite story ever.

As a guy who has always wanted to be trained to be a botch boy by a son man, I LOVE the fact that you tell the story from the sub’s point of view as well as the dom’s. Thank you for that. Hottest thing I’ve ever seen.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A good story , but still only a story even so , too far removed from reality to be taken seriously although the ending has worried me a little , selling people , whether they consent or not , is trafficking and that seems to be a distinct possibility today and I am against any such thing. I remember a friend of mine saying , ''sex is a part of my life, but it isn't my life''. This is really a sissy story , and good up to a point , but it could have been much better.

daveflydaveflyover 2 years ago

my first blow job was on my best friend,his name was Peter, i fell in love and have been openly a feminine gay boi ever since.

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