All Comments on 'How It All Got Started'

In a dom/sub relationship, violence is never used to force submission. A bully uses violence in order to mask his/her insecurities and to cow the victim. Used properly, pain can be pleasurable, but this was used to hurt and is about as erotic as spousal abuse.

The start was fine, and for cuckold tales, this one began better than most. But I'm afraid you don't have the ability to write the dominant voice. I think it would be better if you simply remained in character and narrate the story from your own voice, rather than attempt to be "Bud"!

Boring in Alaska eh. If this floats your boat then march yourself to the nearest help center.<P>

Someplace where a real person will help you find your self respect if you ever had it.<P>

Gosh you are likely beyond help the more I think about it. So sickly sad isn't it.

good strong writing...

Could feel myself having to suck this guys cock so I could watch him please the wife. Very Hot look forward to more.

Thank You for writing.

Loving it.

Are you going to continue this? It has potential

The story had potential, but I was distracted by the glaring errors in the writing, leaving out important words that had the opposite effect of what was meant. A serious writer would have read and reread the story, making sure it flowed properly and was grammatically correct. As for the "bitch", the submission was way too easy, and as mentioned in previous posts, violence should never be part of the dominance...humiliation, coaxing, threats, but never violence.

I only hope the author gets his wish of seeing Bud fuck his wife.

I wish this was my story of becoming a cockhold cock sucker. I have been leaking precum so I ate it as a tribute to the cock I know I will serve soon.

Very nice story I look forward to reading more and dreaming I am the one sucking his cock and becoming the slave

Did it ever occur you to that the "master" might bring back a bloody stump if he sticks his dick into another man's mouth? This was poorly thought out drivel.

No stars