by jankyman
If this excrement is any indication of your "talent", you should immediately seek mental health professional.
Not IR. Humiliation is a FETISH.
1*
stupidest story i have ever read on this site and i have read many stupid stories and im usually a fan of girls cheating on their boyfriends do us a favor and stop writing your not very good at it
The author hates white people and cops. Cool story, bro.
The author probably had a stroke after writing a third of this mess and tried to complete the work the day after he returned from the hospital.
It is that bad.
It lacks imagination,
well I guess you can call it a schizophrenic imagination or something,
it lacks any degree of plausibility.
it’s just... I don’t even know what to call it.
1 star
I hope we get another story like this! Or a ch 2 of this story :3
I generally get off cuck stories but this was absolute garbage of the highest caliber.
If you enjoy writing keep going man, your pieces aren't art, but I think they accomplish what your going for. Well done overall.
all of the stories are similar and you have some fantasy of to be bullied. why don;t u give me your details
In fact, give me your address and I will come and do it myself. What a sick Fuck you are.
I feel the same way your other reviewer does, you suck as an author. I have officers in my family and see them take abuse every day and for you to write about some hoodrat getting away with fucking him over and eventually causing is suicide is lower than whale shit in my book. Eat shit and die scum sucker.
Why would he pay Mandy after getting a blowjob when he already got the handjob, since there was no legal contract binding and keeping promises you don't want to is pointless? And why would the dad kill himself over losing that worthless slut? Please write a sequal where the guy gets some serious revenge, or at least give me the permission to.
This is the most awful story, it could have been something if you’d spent time with it. Nothing in it comes across as remotely real.
O man, thank you. In the beginning, thought that it may be real. I wish that you'd worked on the ending a little.... Not so much for me, cuz I id enjoy it and w