All Comments on 'How Many Times could it Happen?'

by jankyman

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Vile and disgusting drivel.

If this excrement is any indication of your "talent", you should immediately seek mental health professional.

Not IR. Humiliation is a FETISH.

1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
this has to be the

stupidest story i have ever read on this site and i have read many stupid stories and im usually a fan of girls cheating on their boyfriends do us a favor and stop writing your not very good at it

tangledweedtangledweedover 6 years ago
Nothing erotic, just hate here.

The author hates white people and cops. Cool story, bro.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I haven’t ever commented or rated a story in 1.5+ years of reading here

The author probably had a stroke after writing a third of this mess and tried to complete the work the day after he returned from the hospital.

It is that bad.

It lacks imagination,

well I guess you can call it a schizophrenic imagination or something,

it lacks any degree of plausibility.

it’s just... I don’t even know what to call it.

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ughhhh...

This is horrifically bad

newmantopleasenewmantopleaseover 6 years ago
Great story bro

I hope we get another story like this! Or a ch 2 of this story :3

galisongalisonover 6 years ago
Love your stories!

Fun and delightfully mean but also hot.

bpanther777bpanther777over 6 years ago

It was cool. Dude had a rough run though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow! What crap!

Hated this shit, man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Trash

I generally get off cuck stories but this was absolute garbage of the highest caliber.

TwentysevenTwentysevenover 6 years ago
How many times could it happen?

Pray God, only once.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep doing you

If you enjoy writing keep going man, your pieces aren't art, but I think they accomplish what your going for. Well done overall.

galisongalisonabout 6 years ago
I really enjoy it

And I'm glad you're writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
you are sick

all of the stories are similar and you have some fantasy of to be bullied. why don;t u give me your details

CumminginsiderherCumminginsiderheralmost 5 years ago
I hope you die a painful death

In fact, give me your address and I will come and do it myself. What a sick Fuck you are.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
SUCK ASS STORY

I feel the same way your other reviewer does, you suck as an author. I have officers in my family and see them take abuse every day and for you to write about some hoodrat getting away with fucking him over and eventually causing is suicide is lower than whale shit in my book. Eat shit and die scum sucker.

kevinlarochekevinlarocheover 3 years ago
Idiots

Why would he pay Mandy after getting a blowjob when he already got the handjob, since there was no legal contract binding and keeping promises you don't want to is pointless? And why would the dad kill himself over losing that worthless slut? Please write a sequal where the guy gets some serious revenge, or at least give me the permission to.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is the most awful story, it could have been something if you’d spent time with it. Nothing in it comes across as remotely real.

jennifer_CD_Tennesseejennifer_CD_Tennessee11 months ago

I love stories about pigs getting what they all deserve

rockemsockemoforockemsockemofoabout 5 hours ago

O man, thank you. In the beginning, thought that it may be real. I wish that you'd worked on the ending a little.... Not so much for me, cuz I id enjoy it and w

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