All Comments on 'How Matt Became My Lover Ch. 03'

by DaveMate

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DaveMateDaveMateover 9 years agoAuthor

Thanks for reading Jeff and Matt's story. I hope you enjoyed it. If you liked it (or even if you didn't), I would love to read your comment. Good reading.

wingedchaoswingedchaosover 9 years ago

Good story! First, thanks for writing so well and secondly, the characters are well developed and realistic - think I may have used something like that once or thrice! Anyway, please continue writing, you do have the talent! Thanks!

Headhunter22Headhunter22over 9 years ago
Loved it!!!

What a hot story. Well written, great characters, loved it!!!! :)))))

DaveMateDaveMateover 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Glad you liked it you two. I put my heart into it. What you read there is the best I can do :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Casey 1988

I loved the 3 part series it was so emotional ^-^

damejintymcgintydamejintymcgintyover 9 years ago
Really good

One of the best stories on here. It was emotional, funny, hot but above all, believable. I hope you continue to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent romance!

Your story hit me hard in a strange but good way. Probably your society has more homophobia than mine so much so that the dialogue between the two protagonists Matt and Jeff in your story has resonated so intimately and romantically. They are not those slutty jaded gay men trying shamelessly to hook up at every chance they get, who may easily run into one's real life unfortunately. Please keep writing and inspire us with your next story!

DaveMateDaveMateover 9 years agoAuthor
Great comments!

Thanks. New Zealand is actually pretty liberal overall in terms of homosexuality. We have some openly gay elected members of parliament, for example. Rugby can get a bit, how shall I say, homophobic, though. I think Matt's problem was working out how he was going to tell his mates.

On a final note, I probably should have put a warning at the start or in the description about the explicit anal sex in this final chapter cause I know it's not everyone's cup of tea. lol. I enjoyed writing it though :)

irishgal1984irishgal1984over 9 years ago
What happened after that!?

Really enjoyed your stories, I hope you write more :) Thanks so much for writing this series.

jackfrost626jackfrost626over 9 years ago
Nice !!!

Cool story I really enjoyed it especially the part where jeff turned the game around on matt

Hope there's more to come :)

DaveMateDaveMatealmost 9 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the inspiring comment BigJonathon. Lol.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

My god, this was hot! I hope you continue writing.

~elleem

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Have read your story twice, and I love it more now than the first time. Please write some more. New stories would be great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

There’s so much more to their story. Both are vulnerable and have some issues around nudity, being gay, and how their parents made them feel insecure about it. It would be great to see how they help each other through this to have a healthy, public, happy, monogamous gay relationship. Want to read more about these two masculine sexy rugby jocks.

DaveMateDaveMateabout 3 years agoAuthor

Yep. There's more to the story and they're both doing well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Let’s hear this “more to the story” please. What happens next?

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