All Comments on 'How Natalie Became A Wifewhore'

I will be looking for the further adventures of Natalie.

THE WOMAN IN YOUR LIFE THAT FUCK YOUR HEAD UP,WAS IT YOUR MOTHER,WIFE OR SISTER.TO WANT TO MENTALLY ABUSE A WOMAN LIKE THIS STORY YOU ARE CRAZY.

THOSE WHO CAN, WRITE. THOSE WHO CAN'T POST PATHETIC INANE CRITICISMS. VERY GOOD STORY!

Critics who seek to deny others a fantasy life beyond the borders of their own narrow minds are only looking in the mirror at their own pathetic lives. Natalie the Wifewhore has style and took me to a better place in my fantasy life. Nicely done!

Actually, ThirdAge had a survey that found fantasies of being a prostitute was one of the top 5 fantasies of women.

I liked the story.

A fantasy my wife and I share. We probably will keep it as a fantasy and just keep reading stories like this one. We enjoyed your writing style. Thanks

The problem with "stories" such as this is that all the are are repetitive. They are the same cliches over and over. This isn't fantasy, it's lazy. If you find the same thing -- the EXACT same thing -- YOU have the problem.

Well writen.lends itself to be continued or not

Althought the way Nat was drawn into this is more aggressive than I prefer, still a well written story. Keep it up.

That was so well written!!!!!!!!!

Described superbly down to the smallest emotion... brilliant job!!!!!!!

Contrary to whoever the groupies are who like this story, this was not well written. The line of the woman sucking hard convinced the john she was a whore was inept. First tries at writing tend to be cathartic in exercising whatever fetishes or demons the writer holds. It is very difficult to write as a female when you are a male, so stick with the male perspective until you get a handle on that.

Finally, constructive comments favorable or unfavorable are how writers grow. If people only want good commentary, they shouldn't submit stories here.

Where do you get off judging other people's comments?

Go grow a cock you maggot. This story WAS well written, and it was only your pathetic comment that drew me to it and made me read it.

So go lie on the road and become a road kill... your comment only attracted me, and I'm sure others, to read this great story.

Great job, ptstewart.

Contrary to some of the other post. I feel this story was well written. The psychological aspect of what the character went through was well portrayed. It was described excellent by the author.

This story had twist and turns of emotions and personal growth for the woman involved. Each in it's own way leads to an excellent story. Very enjoyable.

Keep writing and I look forward to reading more of your work. We only grow from experience. You've done great in my opinion.

Fantasizing about your wife giving head to strangers in a men's bathroom...gosh, I guess it just doesn't get any better than that. And, gee, I hope I don't piss off the guy who waxed so eloquently about anyone judging someone else's comments. I mean he was so tolerant and all in his rebuttal...and such a wordsmith as well.

This is not a very well written story, but I still loved reading it. It does contain a certain degree of excitement and most readers would probably agree with me.

Lvoe,

Sam

@anonymous in a better place.

Thanks mate, this one deserves recognition.

Still laughing hehehe

I can't believe anyone would like this poorly written story.

I think the author should have started it...

Dear Dside,

(Seeing he feels so compelled to leave such a nasty comment, he obviously feels it was written for him... pathetic)

I find it interesting when that section of society who takes time out to read this stuff, then complains. Particularly when scathing comments are left 'anonymously'.

I mean, get over it. It's a STORY. It's pretty well written. It's a 3 or a 4 or a 5. It's not 'poorly written', or 'inept'.

Comments can be unfavourable AND constructive. Such harsh criticism of a story that is clearly not bad at all, says more about the author of the comment than the story itself.

And I doubt he (or she) has ever tried to write. They may also have an agenda. Who knows.

And to the author, you could always delete the comment. But then you probably wouldn't have this interesting banter going on in your comments section.

smiles

SN

O-kayyy, so now it's okay to hit a woman, and that's a viable part of a stroke story. I dunno about you, but that, to me is not a stroke story. You absolutely lost me right there. This was not a "loving wife story". It was not about love. It was about guilt, violence, desire unfulfilled and a man belittled by an inesperienced little girl.

Little girl grows up, gets married and lives according to her vows with hubby and gets treated as a slave for money, and her marriage is destroyed by a lie. This well-trained college girl can't even choke out the truth? Cannot even try to, for the sake of her children?

CHILDREN SEE THIS SHIT, WHEN IT HAPPENS AT HOME, BOYS AND GIRLS. THEY UNDERSTAND IT, AND IT IS A FORM OF VIOLENCE TO THESE CHILDREN. IT IS ENDANGERMENT. And none of you should treat it or think of it anyway else.

I am a whore wife. Very respectable during the day and on my side of town, but a nasty, "fuck for money" whore wife at night in a nearby city. My husband loves me and encourages me to fuck strangers. I can't imagine not doing it.

Loved the story but take your time with interactions with your johns. Let us hear hot hot you get, how they use you and how dirty and humiliated you become and how nasty it all makes you feel. And then speak to how this nasty humiliation excites you all the more as you look forwad to you next cocks.

Enjoy being the slut/whore you have become

Hugs....Nadine

Well done. My wife was a whore before we met. $20 blowjobs were her specialty.

you retarded brain dead shit for brains fag, you really are insane . I gave it a 5 to offset your 1 vote. God no wonder your wife fucked all those other men before she died. . You're one sick ass wipe.

Its whorewife and her pimp/cuck husband set it up.

Written well. More articulate than many.