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try reading you next story out loud next time, see if it makes sense. I can see where your going, but there is little continuity, your jumping from place to place all while in a semi-lecturer tone. I have read a few of your stories, and the are problems is present in all of them, I would suggest using an editor or consulting someone you can trust to proof read your work. Most importantly your words should flow like water, all ideas flowing along one river until the join the larger body. Take my advice or ignore it, the choice is yours.