All Comments on 'How We Came To Be'

It was worth the wait.

First and foremost let me offer my thanks for your kind words and apologies for the delay getting this published and ! It was a comedy of errors getting it published.

Took 3 tries to get it published. First time, was a screw up on my part. I accidentally submitted a "working" copy of the story, which of course was not worthy of publishing as opposed to submitting the finished product.

Second time, I submitted the finished product which was rejected because "I had already submitted the story once before". So it took me a while to figure out what to do (emails to the moderators went unanswered). Anyway I decided to wait a month before resubmitting it. During that time figured out how to delete the other 2 rejected versions, changed the title to what it is now. Then resubmitted it this week. Looks like it was finally approved and posted.

Again my apologies for the delay

Ed

It is really nice to read the backstory of the pair. I well know the hoops to play with the mods while trying to get something published. I have found that when you resubmit just add re-submission to the title and a note down at the bottom that you fixed what they had issue with.

Back to the story, its humbling to find someone who writes as well as you do without having to find a friendly editor to fix his mistakes. Well written, good story, and damn can you write!

The first run through you neither of them dated now Sandra dated a guy at halloween

True, but the first version I intentionally did not have much of a back story. In the original version Patricia did not go to Florida during Halloween.

The backstory (this version) was mainly to show the internal struggles each girl was going thru. Sandra, being afraid of her feelings for Patricia, did in the backstory accept a date with a guy that she knew. They were not "dating", as in being a couple.

Sorry if that was confusing

Ed

Thanks for putting this update out, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing these with us!

What a lovely story and I love a happy ending. Great job Mymantoy999