by Valkyrie897
Good short story
Lasviscious I haven't seen that word used in a long time
Short is easy though
No character development
little plot
Try something bigger
next time buy a car with abs and esc, no more crashy crashy from a bit of rain
I like how the end gives up hints about what will follow, at least for someone having read multiple were stories. Some more character development would be nice, though.
(And you should definitely ignore the previous Anonymous.)