All Comments on 'Human Android Ch. 12'

now that is what u call a fucked up story lol

Good taste and decency went out the widow in this chapter, Did they ever exist in this story?

Nice.

I'm liking how you turned the jock into a rather caring Dom for the two slaves. Makes him more realistic, in my opinion, and more likely to take care of the slaves so that they aren't harmed or found out. Though, I have to admit that I am very curious to hear more about the ramifications of turning on Rebecca's implant too early. And, the sensory-depravation and earphone programming you put in at the end.

With the earphones constantly talking to them, encouraging them to examine their position, and them being lost in Subspace, the results could be very powerful programming. Might be that the use of the chip is completely unnecessary at this point. Brainwashing complete.

And don't forget Rebecca's nipple rings. She's gonna need some big ones to compete with mom!

Where's the next chapter? Very curious to see how you deal with their being "unused" for several days.

Rebecca's training looks to be coming along swimmingly, but I'd like to see mommy dearest really lay into her. If she's the tough-nut professor everyone claims, let's see what some of her slave-training classes are like! She's reddened Bec's backside a few times but that's all we know of their time together....

Great tale all around. Unique and hot.

I think the next episode should be mostly if not entirely devoted to Bob solidifying his position as master. I would take out Professor Ann Draper first and tell her the situation in plain English. Then I would tell her that if she submits to me I will protect the image and reputation of Professor Ann Draper. Then I would make her proove her submission in some way. Followed by her daughter Rebecca Draper. Dealing with them indivuadly ofcourse.

Chapter 13 has been submitted and will be ready by Friday the 4th May 2012 (or next day)