All Comments on 'Human Gummy Worms'

Poetically done. Puts the reader inside the experience.

Not sure what you intended to achieve, though.

I read it as a fantasy in a fantasy, a story about a superlative drug-induced illusion. When the drug wears off and the people see themselves in reality (if they've even gotten that far together), there comes a WTF moment.

The story ends before that, leaving the reader inside the drug-induced superlative fantasy .. or, perhaps those last 4 words .. show's over, illusion experienced. Back to reality.