All Comments on 'Humanity 2.0, Year 001, Day 028'

by adrammalech

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OpenWordsOpenWordsabout 2 years ago

The alien virus couldn't make him more intelligent... I get it. Totally stupid and bullshit besides... Rewrote his DNA but couldn't effectively alter his intellect? Yeah, nobody is stupid enough to believe that. But even if it were true, why the fuck would an alien choose somebody as stupid as he?

tinfoilhattinfoilhatabout 3 years ago
Good stuff

I'm enjoying this story a bunch.

EugeneSelfishEugeneSelfishalmost 5 years ago
Excellent Science Fiction + Erotica

This is true Science Fiction, not just 'Sci-Fi'. This chapter has confirmed that in my eyes. I love how Literotica actually has some great SF disguised as 'pornography', as this story itself recognizes, tongue-in-cheek in an earlier chapter. Very astute observation.

Plus, the sexy scenes and the erotic elements (pheromones, etc.) are steamed to perfection! Great series!

OLDEDOLDEDalmost 11 years ago
So far Great story

Please Keep Going

Thanks

ED

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good story, great potential

Thank you for sharing your creative abilities.

Looking forward for more chapters of Ben's development and growth.

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