by adrammalech
I love this story. Its absolutely amazing with great execution. Keep writing! I love your work. :D
This is a great story, imaginative, well crafted and not too bad on syntax. However, "I's" (pg 2, para 11)? I'm still chuckling.
Gawd, I'm loving this story! The way you are telling it from both male and female perspectives, is wonderful!
I really wish I could "vote" 10 out of 1-5...
thank you for sharing! :)
"....In a society with a roughly one to one ratio of men to women, that was a building block of a stable society. A guy sleeping around wasn't the norm then......"
Hahahahahahaha!!! That is absolutely one of the most ridiculous statements ever made about modern society. I gotta compliment the author for imagineering a satire worthy of De Foe or Baron Munchhausen.
I am so jealous that I did not write that brilliant a comedy of relationship sarcasm.