by chainedkitten11
dont let the bloggers that whine about grammer get to you keep postin
Apparently the asshole who left a racist comment can't seem to understand that this was an interracial story...hence why he/she continued to read it until the end. Which means that they had the PERSONAL RESPONSEBLITY to STOP READING if they didn't like the context. It was a great story (speaking as a black woman) and I hope there is a sequel.
Good!
Hope to see (read) more. Not a complex story, but for the length, perfect!
Loved the story and your writing. I might consider leaving off the last
paragraph but then that is being just picky...keep writing !
Loved the story and your writing. I might consider leaving off the last
paragraph but then that is being just picky...keep writing !
Great story...when can I meet you at the Power Exchange?
I'll make you dress just like in your story...from Concord,Ca.
story is interracial, it is on its own strength racist. You cant point out race in matters without being racist or reverse racist. Grow up people get some brains.
Always wanted to go to the Power Exchange. Never made it myself. Excited to read this story. Please continue. This is a good first story.