by anonimousbob
Basic but solid story. Personally would have preferred it not become all about her all the time. Having a fantasy to experience something doesn't automatically make it a full time thing. Even the kinky looses it's spark with repetition.
Loved the story, needs to get kinkier. Add other people, make him a slave to all.
Liked the story, good beginning. Add more chapters, more kink, and more people male and female.
Only to find out he had moved away. No one stays with a crazy woman. No one.
The cage is a toy. He can remove it at any time without the key. He can ejaculate while wearing it. So this whole story is just dumb. And when she talks about spit roasting him he should have simply slapped her face and told her their relationship, what ever that was, was over. She wants to bring others into the games they play and all bets are off. Can you say "disease"? Laughably bad story.
OK so the idea was not bad, the writing fine But why do these stories always go too far.
Writing good, few grammatical mistakes but didn't spoil the story. However, as usual, the author gets carried away and it just gets sadistic rather than fun.