by StoryTeller07
No sense of continuity, no real plot, it was worse than 80's porn. I appreciate what you were attempting, but you failed miserably. There was no real depth or character to any of your creations.
I enjoyed chapter 3 & I'm ready to see how this story unfolds. I like the friend dominating a friend premise, but I'm hoping it doesn't turn nasty, as I would prefer a fun & erotic ending.
I cant wait to see what happens next! I hope it stays fun, but also drags out Tracy's inner secrets.
I love that you placed her in a maid outfit. So hot!! Please, pretty please more chapters!!!!
if she was she would have let her go, or even put her in a guest room with her normal clothing. Though the tracy Slut did realize she was on the precipice. Loved the game I really hope this one will get a chance to play it in the fall or early winter