All Comments on 'Humiliated Ch. 04'

Who's Barbara?

Thanks for the comment! I've re-submitted the story with corrections. This is what happens when writing too many stories at the same time.

Aside from the Barbara/Tracie thing, it was a good story!

Storyteller, When do you publish next? A new story or a new chapter? p.

I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Very busy at the moment with work, and a new series, but will continue with Humiliated as soon as possible. Gary

tracy Slut may have ended up in a good home. Slut seems happy, that's important. The furniture bit can be so much fun, did table a few times and walking drink tray, that really is tough to do without 3 or 4 hours of practice, though my tray had glasses on a rubber mat over stainless steel

... a happy ending with an outstanding debt to pay! Ireen MUST DIE!

Lol

No

Irene must be made to suffer the same indignities.

I do so love a nice bit of table turning.

Well written story teller and hope the next chapter arrives soon.

More please!