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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Another great chapter! Keep up the good work.

arrowglassarrowglassover 6 years ago
Great story!

Looking forward to more!!!

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 6 years ago
Wonderful story

Loving all the loving between them and they are so accepting of each other. I think there may be lots of babies in the future.

Bluesfan74Bluesfan74over 6 years ago

Outstanding! can not wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Myslutwife17Myslutwife17over 6 years ago
Love it!

Love it, love it, love it! I can’t wait for the next chapter.

va45va45over 6 years ago
The best yet

Very well, just like real life. Love how everyong in making the move to one family unit.

Firmhands5Firmhands5about 6 years ago
Great details -

Could be a true story - all the passion and intrigue of reality! Thank you for creating such a 'readable' true to life adventure!

Am so pleased I discovered you!

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 2 years ago

Good plot(s) being logically developed. Stephen is pacing himself in a realistic, logical, and mature manner. As long as her remembers the correct status of Sandy and Tracy and honestly considers their opinions, he will succeed.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Still awesome although it is a long story but its got a lot of love and sex 5stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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