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Turtle1952Turtle1952over 6 years ago
So very entertaining

and so very hot and sexy too. This young bloke is having a ball. I just wish he was not so forcing and disrespectful to his ladies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ridiculous

This is one of the most ridiculous stories I have ever seen on this site. Even as fantasy this sucks. It has no eroticism and I will not even attempt to read the other chapters. At some point, some of these authors need to understand that mother and son incest stories are so much better when it only involves mother and son, not some cast of characters with the super stud son. One star and that is only because I can't go lower.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I don't know what the other anonymous is talking about. This series is hot as hell with the mother, aunt, and cousin. Keep up the good work. Another great chapter, keep them coming.

va45va45over 6 years ago
Wow

Just wow and gets better, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
OG4U

Very good once again.

Question for you...are you going to continue Sylvia's Mom and My sensual aunt Madge? really like them as well

TK

xsiveonexsiveoneabout 6 years ago
A good story, but needs less humiliation of the ladies.

I have to agree with Turtle 1952, the fantasy story is all well and good but the humiliation and often nasty name calling are a turn off. If he truly loves these women he wouldn't berate them so. Just my $ .02 worth. I'll keep reading the following chapters until I decide he's too much of an egotistical dickhead.

hyperlizardhyperlizardabout 6 years ago

Please continue with your story it’s a great read

hal1951hal1951about 6 years ago
Need More!

You really need to get more chapters uploaded. Many of us are edging to the point of desperation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wow

Just found this story less than 24 hours ago and have already read all the chapters and can't wait for more, incredible story please continue.

Myslutwife17Myslutwife17about 6 years ago

Another great read I can’t wait for the next chapter.

nickey40nickey40about 6 years ago
How many chapters

How many chapters do you think you will write. How far are you planning on taking it. I think I should at least have a a child born or two before you finish the work

OG4UOG4Uabout 6 years agoAuthor
A few surprises coming concerning babies

Wait and see

c4vetteman94c4vetteman94about 6 years ago
My hope

You focus on this story and bring as many chapters as possible, this is my favorite series on here now and I'm just glad i get to see ot unfold in front of me. I personally hope you stay away from the brands anx maybe do small matching tattoos or matching chokers for the ladies, no need to destroy their skin. Tracy has quickly become my favorite character, I hope she gets everything she wants, she deserves it.

buddah222buddah222about 6 years ago
keep it going #1

This has to be one of the top stories on here at this time, it if not the top one, hope you keep going with many more chapters you are a great story teller and awesome writer thank you for the story so far, looking forward to seeing the rest of it soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
OG4U

It's been a while now, can we expect the next chapter soon and are you going to continue your other stories as well?

Just eager to keep following the stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Keep it Coming

I recently found & binge read this series. I think its very good. In danger of becoming a little 'formulaic' in its format, but still very enjoyable. I cant wait to see who else our boy will bed. Donna? Marie? Savanna? Mistress Katrina? I'm also interested in seeing what happens next in his 'real' life & how he will overcome the obstacles that will appear. (Not just finance, education, and where to live, but also; how is he going to continue to sexually satisfy two? four? six or more? voracious women? LOL) Please keep them coming!

c4vetteman94c4vetteman94about 6 years ago
Its been a while

Hope you haven't given up on this series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

When can we expect another chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
OG4U

Three unfinished stories and then all quiet, I believe you're one of those writers who cannot finish a story as your imagination runs out. Thanks for leaving us hanging in all three

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Truly Unbelieveable

So a timid humiliated wife becomes a sex crazed woman and allows her son to fuck her and other women. Even as a fantasy it's ridiculous, i gave up on the 4th chapter and only went to the last one to comment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Love the story's please continue few missed things but the story itself is great please please next chapter

Really looking forward to next installment please continue

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984over 5 years ago
More

Came across this story today and really need more. There's quite a few more chapters needed to be written please add more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

the story itself is great just few missed things please please next chapter

Really looking forward to next installment please continue all your stories.

dikupinyadikupinyaabout 5 years ago
Thank You

may i have another? chapter or two that is.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
More chapters.

I enjoyed the story. I hope you will write more on this family. I like the way it is written and I read more than just an incest story. I see one of love and caring and one of true love between people. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
more

please write more this story is great thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Surprised

i thought the beginning had about 30% to many, i love you's and almost clicked out.

i quess you did listen to the comments. the story grew on me and could not stop reading it. why don't they find an island, no one to judge them and they can run around naked all they want. a few more women would help with the gene pool.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Absolutely More Please!!

Great story but please keep going. This could warrant another 12 chapters.

Sandds1Sandds1over 4 years ago
12 Chapters of Love and Devotion

These 12 Chapters were very well written, full of sexual excitement, fire intrigue, exceptional truth and betrayal--just to name a few. This 19-year old college student had to assume the identity and growth as a full grown man. In that growing stage he accumulated two women that absolutely adored him (he'd make ANY pimp look like a foolish child). He has somewhat what the wisdom of King Solomon and a dick on steriods. I very much liked this story and awaiting for you (OG4U) to finish

Bek2277Bek2277over 4 years ago
Its been to long

Pls write more dont leave it like this its good story

SAV12SAV12over 4 years ago
THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY!

UNTIL I GOT TO THE LAST PAGE, THIS WAS A 5+* STORY. NOW IT'S A VERY GOOD STORY WITH NO ENDING. IT HAS BEEN ALMOST TWO YEARS SINCE THE AUTHOR OFFERED UP SOME MORE CHAPTERS AND I FEAR THE WORST FOR HIM AND THE READERS. FIRST, THE AUTHOR MET AN UNTIMELY DEATH, OR THIS WAS SOMEONE ELSES STORY AND HE GOT CAUGHT PLAGIARIZING THIS STORY. I CAN'T UNDERSTAND HOW AN ENDING SUCH AS THIS COULD HAPPEN. WITH SO MANY OPEN ENDS THIS STORY COULD GO ON FOR ANOTHER 12-20 CHAPTERS BEFORE A TRUE ENDING EVOLVES. WITHOUT A PROPER ENDING I WOULD POST A WARNING TO OTHERS NOT TO BOTHER.

ZaneGray65ZaneGray65about 4 years ago
This is a great story

This has been a great story, but why did you end like that. We need to find out how it ends! My girlfriend hates ending like this and so do I! But its still a great story!

AvidStoryLoverAvidStoryLoverover 3 years ago

I am getting so tired of the disappointment of reading a great story that has no end on this site. There should be something setup on this site that the author is required to flag the last chapter as an ending. Thus stories with no final chapter i can just skip. Also, as a search criteria you could also include sories with a final chapter flagged. Anyway thats my rant of disappointment of another great story with no ending that i wish i never invested the time to read.

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 3 years ago
Oh NO

Please please NO, it’s been nearly three years since you finished the last chapter. Please finish this amazing story I’ll be absolutely shattered if you don’t give this story the ending it deserves. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 3 years ago
Follow up comment.

The only excuse I’ll accept for not completing this story is that you’re fucking dead and buried...

OG4UOG4Uover 3 years agoAuthor
To Aussie1951 and all of my other readers

LOL I am not "fucking dead and buried." Three years ago I had a bit of chaos in my life and simply stopped writing. Two years ago a new lady who is 24 years my junior came into my life. Subsequently, we have been on a two year "honeymoon." ;-). No! I will NOT write a story about that. LOL

I will, however, get back to work on this and my other stories in the near future. First, I have to read them them again to catch up with where I left off and where I was going with this one and each of the others. Thank you all for your patience and continued support.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
Damn ! Geet back to writing!

Hell!! Such a great story! Get back to it! U left us hanging by our balls! Please, continue the story!

tlevanssrtlevanssralmost 3 years ago

I have read this story 4 times. I love it but you need to finish it or keep it going. You have had a long enough break so get back to writing. PLEASE!!.

UncletoddUncletoddalmost 3 years ago

Please add more to this story I've read it twice already I really enjoyed it.

Roland58Roland58almost 3 years ago

I have enjoyed this story very much please write more of it

orion6275orion6275over 2 years ago

I loved this story, the characters, I was hoping you would continue writing this story. I can not wait to hear what happens next. Thank you for this wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved it but left a lot of unanswered questions. I would love it if you would finished the story. Your writing is just great ad I do hope you decide to finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please it has been 4 years, there is so much left of this story that must be resolved. Children, second generation incest, reversal of tubal legation, founding of an empire, the tradition family first in love and life, a nude estate, daughters schooled in the arts of love for daddy, just as a few.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

One of best stories I have ever read. Bravo?

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 2 years ago

Good series but you need to finish it. There is so much you can do with a Dom/Sub relationship. A 5-star series but after so many years, I dobt that the author will finish it.

orion6275orion6275about 2 years ago

the story is fantastic, I just hope you will write more chapters. I am interested in reading more about the harem of Steven

Gym52Gym52about 2 years ago

EXCELLENT!!!

A brilliant series, which you have left with more open ends than a frayed rope, please give serious consideration to continuing this excellent tale.

You have done a brilliant job of describing your characters and their relationships, also explaining a plausible scenario in which they have all lived, loved and worked, small town mid-west America.

Congratulations and thank you for publishing your work on this site, your work is much appreciated.

P_DoggP_Doggabout 2 years ago

Great story, but nothing worse than reading 12 chapters just to find the story unfinished.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please publish chapter 13

Timj94Timj94almost 2 years ago

So wait I'm a little confused why was the mc untrusting of Rachel at first

DogmancyprusDogmancyprusover 1 year ago

Long time since this chapter was published. Is the story going to be finished/continued. The characters are well developed and a good plot. MORE PLEASE

chargerman71chargerman71over 1 year ago

I thoroughly enjoyed the Humilated Wife series. But I also thought at the end Ch. 12 there were many loose ends i.e. where they all moved to live did they buy a vineyard and winery?, the babies, Karen's roll, what did the brand look like and did anyone chicken out? What happened to Zack and Savanna?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I agree with the others here. We need MORE much more. How many babies do they have? Do they move to Europe? Does he ever bang Savanna? Does the company thrive? Does he stop with four wives or get more? Too many questions left unanswered. Please answer them. I think he at least deserves a blowjob from Savana.

orion6275orion6275over 1 year ago

very much liked this story so far, I was hoping you would continue the story. it seems you left it hanging

01Timber6701Timber67over 1 year ago

It’s a hanging story ,, why ,, there’s so much more that needs to continue

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Okay I realize you haven't written anything since 2018 but this story needs to find an ending or at least answer the questions you left in your readers minds. So Please write more of this story.!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Where is the rest of it?

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Awesome story but you can't leave us hanging like this though it's been a while would you please continue with this story??????????????? 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

maddog8946maddog894610 months ago

"Você não fez nada errado," it's Brasilian - Portuguese to be Portugal - Portuguese must be " Tu não fiseste nada de errado"

Gym52Gym527 months ago

I concur with myself from just over a year ago, you have built a world inhabited by Steven, Sandy, Tracy, Rachel and Karen, along with a few notable others, you are the only person in this world who can inform your readers of what has happened in your fictitious world.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Savanna is worse than I thought. Just a cheating slut. Basically offering herself to Steven and cheating on Zack. What a slut and not in the good way. Zack needs to get rid of her. Do the guy a favour and wise him up to her. He deserves better. Honestly just fuck her and get it over with. May as well since she's clearly gagging for it. She'll get it elsewhere anyway so it's not like you'd save anything by not fucking her. Once a cheater, always a cheater. But really, he should inform Zack to dump her cheating ass at some point.

I'm glad they all declared their loyalty to him at the end there, promising to never allow any other man to have them. Oddly enough after Steven said something retarded about possibly having to bring in another man to give him a break. That's the most beta shit I've ever heard in a harem story, I cringed so hard.

I wonder why the author stopped writing at this point. There is so much more to be told. I hate stories that abruptly cut off especially after being this long already. Yet another case of authors being unable to finish what they started. Even a 1 page epilogue would be better than just leaving so many loose ends. Maybe someone can pick this up and give us closure.

ar_knightTD_90ar_knightTD_904 months ago

I see the last installment of this story was 2018, is there going to be a revival/ continuation of the series?

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