by hubone
I love this story! keep up the great work you are an amazing writer
From first person to third person; a tad distracting. Are you familiar with self-editing and polishing? Obviously not.
...."action that would inflict the most humiliation I could think of" why is she married? Divorce the slut and go on with a happy life without that whore!!!
Please continue the story. I loved the first two chapters.
But you love you husband , you fucking cunt you don't deserve a husband. Just a bullet to the head