All Comments on 'Hummingbird'

by MrPezman

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FA_JFFA_JFalmost 11 years ago

A tale well told.

jpb531jpb531almost 11 years ago
Beautiful

Wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing your words.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

A great story, although dark elves are matriarchal not patriarchal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
beautifully written

A wonderful love story .......I loved it !!!! Thank you for sharing it with me (us) .

Stephen J

sjhallahan@verizon.net

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Phenomenal

Absolutely breath taking story with great character development. Done so well as to make you care fore the well being of each unique charecter and the story. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
awwwww

That was a beautiful ending

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
a very well writen, well told story

This was as good as any book I've read by any proffesional

author.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

I hope you are working on publishing! This was very good!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
beautiful story wth good length (no pun intended)

a bit formally worded for my taste, but very detailed. all together a masterful work

firewolf54firewolf54over 8 years ago
humming bird

i have read alot of storys on this site but i thing this is one of the best.i wish only they continue into another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Fantastic Detail

As a bowyer and wood carver myself, I appreciated those details in the story. It was very well written, amazing work!

ansdguyansdguyabout 8 years ago
Outstanding!

This is isn't a catigory that I usually venture into, however, when I the very high score it had received, I felt compelled to investigate. I was immediately drawn in. I don't know when I have enjoyed a story more. Thank you for this amazing effort!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
great story

This is an amazing story, I wish there was more to it. I love a good story and this will rank among the best. Thank you for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Thank you so much...

A beautifully written and cleverly crafted story. Gorgeous language and setting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Amazing

I wish I could give this 10 stars....what an amazing story. Very well written....easily my favorite!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
20 Stars, Were They Available!

A wonderful and refreshing story, superbly written. A treasure. Thank you for sharing this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A great story.

My kind of tale. Killing, wounding and real love. Author, thank you. (good sex)

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefalmost 4 years ago
Well done!!!

Wasn't sure what I was getting into at first because I don't usually read stories in this category, but now that I've finished reading it, I'm sorry I can only give it five stars. Loved how the people kept in character with their spoken words. It was kind of like listening to Yoda talking to Luke, even if it was different, you still knew what they were saying. Really an enjoyable story, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

A little rough, but the haunting story is weli worth your time.

The Hoary Cleric

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