All Comments on 'Hung like a Grape Ch. 03'

You did it for me with the BBC trope. Big Black Cock is so overused so what started out as a promising story turned out to be one more fucking cliche. Don't waste your time with any more of this diarrhea, and don't waste ours either!

Don't listen to that Troll you wrote an excellent story.I hope you continue with your story and add more chapters with Sherry. I want you to know that I have been a long long time reader of literotica and you are the first author that I have ever encouraged to continue to write.Well done.5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I do like the idea of the story but it was a little fast turning Sherry. I would love to be humiliated like this but not about the money and pin number Hope to read more on this even though you already stated it's a 3 part series.

i'm hardly ever on the side of negative criticism, especially since you have put the effort into writing the story in the first place. I think you had a promising story that quickly nosedived. There is no real motivation for these women to do this to their coworker whom they viewed as a friend. I get the transformation, but full on porno movie on the first weekend? I just think you rushed it.

But it was rushed. Lacked any real struggle emotionally or otherwise. And WAY too many cliches.

I thought after chapter one that this story might get better. Instead, it nosedived into complete nonsense. I reluctantly gave you three stars but only for your effort. I wouldn’t quit my day job if I were you.

I feel like you didnt need 4 black guys if u were only gunna detail him taking 1 cock at a time. Then u just glazed oved the rest of the screwing.