All Comments on 'Hunger Ch. 03'

I would love it more if it was longer, but please don't stop!

Very interesting, looking forward to other chapters, but make them longer and more frequent! PLEASE!

This IS the romance section, Get Jerry out of it IMO

Very entertaining story line. Thanks for sharing.

Are two very different words. Misusing them completely throws me out of the story.

Also, I'm not sure about the POV switching, especially unannounced. It was a bit jarring the first time with Ben, but adding Jerry to the rotation is perhaps a step too far.

... for three people, if they're the right people.

When it's the right combination. Thank you for adding this spice to your story.

Ménage a Trois? Interesting arrangement.............................