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by AchtungNight

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
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you should continue this

AG31AG316 months ago

I'm one of those who prefer "pure erotica." That is, stories without a back story. Where every paragraph contributes to arousal... or at least build up to arousal.

But I think you did what you set about doing really well. It flows. I didn't hit anything that took me "out of the moment." Happy to give it 5 stars.

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I am an Internet fanfiction author who enjoys penning fantasy movies starring my favorite celebrities. I have posted some of my erotic writings here. More can be found here- https://archiveofourown.org/users/Achtungnight/pseuds/Achtungnight Enjoy! Note- for those interested i...