All Comments on 'Hunting for Bambi'

Great read, nice pace, love it!!

... you have very little writing ability and obviously have no interest in Proof Reading!

In fact I was very surprised to see how many 'stories' you'd written!

I thought that this was your very first attempt!

Still, it might get better when you've spent a few more years in school!

Love this read as much as another of your story - No vacancy

Very hot, and sexy, and i love that twist in Frank from a nice guy to an 'adorable' bastard in the sex scene

- looking forward to the 2nd chapter soonest!

(im hoping there would be a part where tables are turned though; where the hunter becomes the hunted *evil laugh*)

I've seen the idea before but yours is the best telling so far. The swaps between perspectives are well executed too. Keep on writing, please!