All Comments on 'Husband Can’t So I Did Ch. 02'

You have to finish this!

what happened with mark?

Hi bigtddbr

Thank you for the effort.

I felt that the 2 chapters lacked passion. Perhabs you could solved this by some hot comments, instead of merely routine-like sentences like "Tell me when".

However, the original idea with the gangbang insemination is very good.

I hope that you take this as a piece of constructive critism which is the meaning with this comment :-) But remember that your idea was good, it is just the writing which needs some work, but I am certain that you will get there.

Please write the next chapter!

WTF a rather abrupt end it is now June 2921 so where is the finale?????? I am disappointed not to have the ending.

I could also complain about incorrect spelling

Great storey, but 12 years have passed and no chapter 3, how come, you have written many other stories since. This cahapter is worth a 5 but I only gave3 because o&the missing cahapter/s.