All Comments on 'Husband's Revenge'

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chytownchytownover 9 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Why is it that people who try to " hire a hitman" usually end up hiring a cop. I'll admit that this was a little different, in that she tried to hire an employee of the intended target, but this story was a waste of my time. Not very erotic

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More

Another chapter please

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 9 years ago
Liked it

Short sharp and punchy.

Good one

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
write more m uch more drive these assholes

crazy!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Crap

Stupid, useless, bad story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
???...

Why did she want him dead? Why was his reaction so very over the top? What's the backstory with these people?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well, that ending way too soon even for the evening. There is so much more that could be done before she is taken away by the slave folks. Too bad we will not find out what happens as the beginning was way hot. All of the author's stories are the same...great beginning then nothing.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This was an extreme version, of a common theme. The wifey wants out of the marriage, and thinks she has more control than she does. Why, or how, does not really matter. She overestimated her control on him. And trying to kill him, and assume take his money, was her downfall. What a twist of fate for her, that he works in human trafficking. Say goodbye to your coolio puta, in a Mexican whorehouse!

5 stars.

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An expat living in Finland. I write about things that I would never actually want to do to anyone. I enjoy them as fantasies, but nothing more. Hopefully they are read in the same way. My work does centre around non-consensual sex - especially the earlier stories - so if that...