All Comments on 'Hypnotic Ch. 05'

You are so cruel. You cant leave it at that. Bad Cia! Now hurry up and write more :0

As soon as Dav said that Ellis was blocking the bond, I knew the block was coming from the outside and Ellis' headaches are part of it.

FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!! (or "....Oh come on!!!!!) lol

I love them both. Will their bond survive? waitin for next chapter

Ellis has some thing to do with Benny 's mate, god i love this story can't wait for the next chapter please post fast again loved it

Ok, did somebody just shoot Ellis through the open window?? Please don't leave us hanging for long.

I knew that Ellis's headaches were not normal.

I just love your stories! Don't wait too long before you submit the next chapter (:

sigh, another good one ;D hehe this one has gotta be my fav couples ;) enjoying it so far!

I think this is my favourite of all your series of stories so far! I feel so sorry for Dav making such a huge mistake! Can't wait to see how it all turns out. Buzz xx

Ciaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

LOL.

Need I say more??? *wink*

Well then... I suppose I was kind of close in the fact that his brother was mated. so Yay me. I can't wait for the rest. Great job Cia!

xoxo

C.

Oops whtcha did dev do $$ Fucked up badly

Lolz Dave did the right thing by kicking him out.He z no good. No money, no sex, no class,no looks, no brains.what can he give to dave Lolz....just his so called l.o.v.e.Lolz Dave z no fool to take him.Lolz Dave z already got a rich, sexy, successful, stunning, smart, successful mate.

Yup now atleast now dave wont have to be ashamed to explain to his friends why he was hanging around a low class, poor, ugly, fat, stupid,loser,bitch. **

This story now carries sad and painful undertones. Hmmm Ellis , I can't imagine someone doing all that to me what Dave did to him. I would have broken down.Ellis supported Dave through his worst times, when noone else was suppoting Dave, but once things got better for dave, all dave could do to Ellis was throw him into trash with the heart breaking accusations.

You have updated next chapter. Awful Ellis. Noone should be in his place, now that sun is shining on Dave, he has changed.He no longer needs Ellis. Glass breaks with noise, but a heart breaks in silence. Can see that happening here in this story.

Heart goes out for Ellis

This story is very funny.Just to sum up-

Dave hurt Ellis more then he deserve, how can Dave be so cruel? Ellis loves Dave more then he deserve, why is he such a fool?

Saint Valentine bless you all

Shocking chapter.Dave hates every inch of Ellis with a capital H.bad enough.Wonder if Dave ever had anything for Ellis except hate

whats happening to Ellis.Dave almost killed him .Even if Ellis is dying, why is dave near him. Dave anyways wanted Ellis dead.Ellis must be hurting a lot to see Dave near him in his last moments.Goddddd Dave wants to enjoy every moment of Ellis dying. Ohh Ellis

Cia81 atleast give a peaceful death to Ellis

Cia, you're doing great. you really keep taking it up a notch. I love the emotions you pull out of me as a reader. The scene between them was so powerful. I felt like I could feel their love and need and some unseen force you could imagine if the mates connection existed and then around it to feel the betrayal and anger and hurt at what had happened. I still think Dav better grovel more. I understand him saying he didn't think...but what he did was horrible. He better explain what in the past made him act and then not think until it was way too late and almost past the point of no return. How is Ellis supposed to forget this force that Dav is focussed on him wanting to kill him? I mean, how do you forget that and go back to that connection they had in the days prior. I feel like that bell can't be unrung. Dav needs to explain and grovel and Ellis has to get across how it felt to see his mate willing to act that way in general and then to find it aimed at him. Afterall, he hasn't seen 'the Snake' in action yet. He's see Dav up until things went to shit. I hope you can add these aspects in as they move forward.

I am still wondering about the brother's story with his mate. Ellis should be saying his brother is here with his mate. I mean, if they are caught it will be worse. Natham and Velaktu are fair. I don't understand how they stood by to see people killed...whether they needed to get in deeper or not it takes a certain person not to blink at that. Also, why not join forces with the Carthera to bring down these people themselves?

So is Natham's brother and his brother's mate one in the same?

I don't think any makeup is gonna be long lived if he keeps his brother and his mate being there a secret. I CAN"T WAIT to see what these headaches are. What is causing them....chomping at the bit :)

Amen, let Ellis die in peace.Beautiful story.

Ditto Wonderful ending. The ugly, fat, stupid, poor, downtrodden Ellis dies peacefully and Dave jumps to sexy, super rich, smart, beautiful arm candy who can take him places

Whoever is spamming the comments anonymously? That's lame. My motto is flamers will be laughed at and boy am I having fun. Oh, and btw, the character's name is Davis, Dav for short. Not Dave. Pay attention so your ignorance isn't quite as apparent and go find someone else that might actually take your bait and get mad. All you're doing is driving up the comments on the chapter. Boo hoo for me.

For those who enjoyed the chapter, Thank you! I'm going to do a final edit and then post the next chapter tomorrow. So, not that long of a wait since I left you on a major cliffie, lol.

Cannd =D What can I say? I get so much enjoyment out of reading your comments. I think you'll be pleased with the answers coming up to your questions.

Cia81 you need to take comments from the readers in the right spirit. Everyone has a right to leave comments here . Dunno which country you are from. But readers are reacting only to your story and you gotta take it

If readers are commenting on your story that means story has stirred up the readers.negative or positive . Its your story. Its your baby. The positive character is your too and the negative character is yours too. If Ellis is good credit to you. If Davis is bad credit goes to you only.

We would comment what we wanna

TROLLS

There will always be those few who cannot simply walk away and must vent their own frustrations. In reality very few people walk away from any relationship that easily and if you are not enjoying the story then that indicates its not to your taste and you need to move on not harrass and attempt to deter the author. I personally enjoyed the 'story' and as it is a story i understand there is a slough of backstory contributing to their decisions that we may not consider. Cia81 please keep writing and update soon.

Anon wonderfully said. very few people walk away from a relationship easily but there are those FEW people there right.This story is abt 'em.Davis is one of them.If there are people like Ellis, then there are people like Davis too.Davis never invested anything in that relationship.Readers can see that. It is always about what he wants, what he needs and what he does NOT want.In fact Was it ever any relationship from his side? doesn't seem so.And is it something new that we have seen here?. Bad guy kicking off the good guy.same happening here.

Harrass te author. who did that

Anon agreed. Of course people do have reasons to walk away.People simply walking away coz they found someone better, richer, sexier,smarter does happen. can't deny it. This reason might be right for dem but wrong for others.

Ellis, may his soul rest in peace. ~ Jonathan

Its valentine's day today.Read your story.

Just one suggestion.Please dont let Ellis fight for his life in front of davis.Davis anyways couldn't care less.For Davis the only criteria for love is money, power, beauty.Ellis has none of these.Davis would only sadistically enjoy Ellis's misery.You should make Davis think that Ellis is just akin to drama queen whoz faking all this misery to manipulate Davis.

Davis has already got what he wanted then why do you want to make Ellis go through this agony in front of Davis.Davis wouldn't beleive any of this is real.Please Let Ellis smile in front of him and say he is alright. Please dont do this to Ellis.You should not let Davis come to know about whats happening to Ellis at all. If Ellis continues to faint in front of Davis, it would give davis another chance to feel happy abt Elli's suffering. For chris sake Davis shouldn't come to know of Ellis suffering.

i get the first few ''legible'' comments... But anon comments are damn weird... Looks like valentine's day rush brought in all forms of sea creatures... Smelly fish 'n al... LOL..

Great job..

P.s. Plz dont make Snake grovel.. I think he's gone through enough.. In a way his mate has been too trusting of his twin and hidden things from him.. I'm not saying what snake did was right... But... Its a relationship... Not the justice system. There have to be ups and downs..

Love

*L*

I think that this chapter was brilliant, but Dav does need to explain his reaction as it more than just an impulsive gesture, but I like how it ended and as usual a cliff hanger geez hurry with the next chapter

Nice read on Valentines Day.Many stories have dealt with the sensitive issue"Relationships have ups and downs"..

Sorry but Is Davis in a relationship with Ellis?Relationship is based on trust and love. Both are lacking here.Davis is hungry for beauty,power, sex,wealth.Obviously Ellis cant give him any of these.Davis has neither love nor trust for Ellis.Davis almost tried to kill him.Is this love?which lover would want his love dead?I would kill someone for my wife, not kill my wife for someone.Davis doesn't understand this as he has absolutely no feelings for Ellis except hatred and wants to kill him.

Davis belongs to a specie of snakes who were not favoured but it was Ellis who stood up for Davis everytime.But when things got right what did Davis do? Davis forgot all his scars and He realized that he's better kill Ellis because Ellis was not what he wanted in his mate.No money, No sex, No beauty,No power.He accused Ellis of hiding things.What was Ellis hiding? Seems nothing but his pain which Davis never understood. Unlike Davis, Ellis was not hiding his sexy, beautiful, smart, wealthy mate.Unlike Davis, Ellis was not hiding his hunger for sex, beauty, power and wealth.Ellis was always what he is.

Ellis has never hidden anything but his pain but someone rightly commented here , you as a writer should not make Ellis suffer and die before Davis.Whenever Ellis has to die, he should die away from Davis. Davis would only celebrate his death.

You are one of the best writers here and hope you continue writing well.

Five stars for you. You certainly are great writer.

Story was as good as the comments made by your fans here.

It was a sad story but Your story came as a treat for Valentine's day. Hearts are meant to be broken:)

Blessings

Kael

*Sigh* Ellis .Heart Wrenching

You have portrayed emotions so well that you made me almost wanna get into your story & replace Daves and set everything right.can:t do that. Im not the protagonist of your story. Daves knows what to hold on and what to let go.

I'll follow your stories now.

Cia would you allow Ellis to be my Valentine.You can continue your story with me as the male lead instead of Daves.I am black. I might get lucky.Kevin

I read inital chapters and thought Daves and Ellis would make a good pair.Coming to chapter 5 things have gotten sadder. Didn't expect this from Daves.Why did he do this with Ellis. Ellis must be hurting real bad. Give us next chapter soon.

I just fell in love with Ellis. Id do anything If i could get someone like Ellis.Whats wrong with Daves

I am gay and Ellis has grown all over me. It is the day of love and i want a love like Ellis.Ellis just seems so right.He can take care of everything in a very gentle way .I would not do even half the wrong things which Daves did.

I love this story. Forgiving is one of the hardest things to do in a relationship, but if you really love the person it is definitely worth a shot. I love Dav and Ellis. They are my favourite couple and hope they can resolve their issues. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I have to say I'm baffled by some of the comments being left. They are ignorant and completely laughable. Have you even read the story? Might I suggest you do?

to the coherent commenters. This is one of my favorite stories to write, so I'm glad so many people like it. The incoherent bumbling comments are similar enough I think I have just picked up a weird spammer, but I'm just ignoring them for now. I won't waste my time on people like that, when I have actual fans to appreciate and more writing to do!

btw, next bit is just about ready to post to the queue. YAY!

I went to leave you a comment about how much I liked this chapter, and happened to read the 'other' comments. *shakes head* It's really ridiculous that someone would spend that much time (on Valentine's no less) trolling up like a fool. Then again, it's also sad when you picture the person that actually has that much time to sit around and make up senseless comments. Can't you just see them now? Sitting in front of their computer in a darkened basement somewhere in their mother's house. Three garbage bags worth of trash scattered at their feet. Probably haven't showered in at least two weeks. Mmmm, yes heartbreaking....

And while we actually will be spending the day enjoying the holiday of love, they will still sit in front of their computer (alone) and troll on author's who are proud of their work, because they have nothing better to do. Tre Sad.

Anyways, I loved this chapter! Keep up the good attitude and they will ignore you eventually, but you probably already know that. ;) Happy Valentine's!

NT

Ignore the haters.

You are one of the best writers in this comm.

Your vivid characters leap up the page and captivates me. Your works are a pure joy to read.

Thank you for sharing your gift.

Some astute and some heartfelt and some very weird comments which reveal more about the poor choices posters have made in their own personal lives than any relevance to your story.

Just for the record anonymous postings can only be done once per story, then you must sign-in, so I think you have acquired quite a few more than one spammer.

It is all grist for the mill as your imagination and storytelling is very refreshing and engaging. Thanks for sharing. It is our priveledge to be let into your imaginary world.

I love this story and am waiting for the next one. BTW anyone for troll hunting. 8)

I love all your stories, but the Dav and Ellis dynamic is so heartbreaking and in such a good good way. I can't wait to see what else you have in store. Glad you didn't let them have a 'miracle fix' to their problems, it makes the comfort at the end of all the hurt, that much sweeter. And its just more realistic (You know, as realistic as we could make Cathera :D) Cant wait for more!

Cia,

I don't care what anyone says. I love your Carthera stories and hope you continue for a long time. I will be an avid reader always.

I especially love the Ellis and Dav story line...so many twists and turns. I do hope that Ellis does finally accept the bond. They are good together!!

Keep up the good work honey...

your stories are wonderful and i almost never find mistakes....but in the beginning when you were having ellis list what he could and couldn't eat, tea was on the don't list yet here you have him drinking tea, one would think he would leave the stuff alone especially after he just had a migraine...just wanted to make you aware of it and i truly love your stories so little things like this are easily looked over, thank you for listening to me ramble

I appreciate every fan comment, and pointing out plot flaws I miss too! :D

A damn good plot and guys so hot! Hey babe, you know what I like :-)

so far this was the best story of your trilogie. I loved the emotional rollercoaster but you mad Ellis forgive Dav to fast: he wanted to kill him and accuse him 5 min. later of beeing a "whore". This is not love, there is no respect from Davs side. This developpment is for me not believable unless Ellis is a wimp and lack a backbone so it makes him unlikeable - he becomes a doormat.

There for I'm disappointed.

You should've make Dav work harder for his forgivness an establish an emotional equal relationship (with all his wounds and hurts) then it would be a 5 star story. such a pitty....