by only_more_so
Beautiful, sensual and erotic!
Reading this story brought back some good massage memories for me. Adding the hynopsis voice is genius - Wonder if it will work in reality?...
This was a short but very well written bit of eroticism. Very well constructed and a novel premise on this site. Someone who hypnotizes someone for the benefit of no one but the recipient! On this site? Who knew it could happen? Again Congrats!
Well-written, short, extremely erotic tale. A simple, common situation evolved into a romantic interlude. Keep the stories coming!
LeoDavis
There are sexy stories, fuck stories, and erotic stories. Your story had sex in it but it is a well written erotic tale. As well written as it is, it makes it an outstanding effort. Thank You. Ronnie W.
I love words, well written words, they are sexier than any story filled with fucks, cunts, other words so overworked that they may be a short cut to descriptive, but are not erotic. "unrequited erection". Wonderful writing, fun story----thanks!