All Comments on 'Hypnotized at the Costume Party'

by Miles63

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Miles63Miles63over 6 years agoAuthor
Apologies for typo’s.

Apologies for the typo’s, read & re-read it so many times & you still find some afterwards. I will correct this ASAP.

Juliacd2014Juliacd2014over 6 years ago

Where can I get those pills 😈

missterious777missterious777over 6 years ago
wow

Great story, well written, and hot.mmmmmm

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yikes!!!!!!

Am I glad you're back. I've read everything you've written. LOVE IT ALL!!! Go Baby!

davasubdavasubover 6 years ago
So so hot

Transitioning from Brad to Brandie is well done in this story, I would want to be Brad transitioning. Nicely written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Almost perfect

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. I missed only one thing: As closure, she should have gone for a full sex change.

But that's just my kink, it was perfect otherwise.

Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Loved it.

This would be a dream come true. I SO wish to be Brandi. Love that name. But, Kira is who i am in my heart of hearts giggle. Well done

MarieJoanneMarieJoanneover 6 years ago
Beautiful.

As a Brad to Brandie myself, I relate to so much in your beautiful story. Well done.

HeatherMaureenHeatherMaureenover 6 years ago
Very Compelling

Really enjoyed the story line and felt the losing struggle of the subject as Brandie emerged and Brad became immersed in that emergence. Does make me wonder if such is possible and if so could I find someone willing to help me throw off the last shackles of my masculinity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Cum slut hypnosis

Boy do I ever wish this could really happen to me this is just way I feel inside but am to afraid to do anything about it! This story makes me beyond horny and jealous that I am not Brad/ Brandie! I so Yurn to be a cum slut for a sexy tranny. I absolutely LOVE this story! Thank you. scared suppressed little girl in a mans body.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
cany ypu make this story

succubus wants to take school under her control

so she feminize guy and change them to whores as here soldier or new succubus and then use them to seduce other students

pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase

tdkb1916tdkb1916about 6 years ago

love this story; wish it could happen to me

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice

Nice. Fucked up. But nice. You had plenty of typos, but none that were too obvious. I applaud your own use of suggestion in the discriptions of the environment, keeping the focus on the characters. It was a nice touch.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Absolutely amazing!

Wow! Just an all around balanced and excellently written story. Good slow but steady development. I truely wish it could have been me. Just wow.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Your story made me very horny. And wanting to cross dress

sassysuetvsassysuetvover 5 years ago
Very erotic story!

I usually don't like stories where a guy has sex with a CD, but this story thrilled me beyond belief. It was very well written and highly erotic. I was able to relate to both Brandie and Justin, but of course more so with Brandie; and I was able to cum when she came.

Thanks to Miles63 for writing and posting this story.

JinixiJinixiabout 5 years ago
Best story in years

Nice well written and believable. Can't wait to check out more stories from you. Hope you have one about a wife forcing husband into this. If not write one.

ExtrawayExtrawayover 2 years ago

This is one of the hottest stories I’ve ever read. Still come back to it from time to time. Hope to see you write more stories

daveflydaveflyover 2 years ago

what a great story, i wish i was brad and could become brandie. i would love my master forever

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I have always loved your stories. You invoke a lot of raw emotion in your characters and do an incredible job with their mental breakdowns into the perfect end products. I hope you come back to write again at some point. Your work is a pleasure to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

wow...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story I do wish you continued the Chameleon one though

raiderbob555raiderbob555about 1 year ago

Wow I wish this would happen to me : THANK-YOU

FlaresandslippersFlaresandslippers3 months ago

I would assume English is your 2nd language lol

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