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HeyAllHeyAllabout 7 years agoAuthor
Author's Note

This is a revision and repost of one of my original stories. Hope you enjoy.

Heyall

January1955January1955about 7 years ago
nice cure

The removal of the term taboo. Once removed, no limit to explorations.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great. Just one suggestion

Thanks for another great story, but I just wished you had said whether her pussy was bald or not. I assume it was, and I prefer them nicely trimmed myself, but more description would have been nice.

grayge37grayge37about 7 years ago
Most enjoyable!

Thanks again for another one of your stories. I can't help but feel a need for another chapter in these two lives. Hopefully that's what you have in mind.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Need another installment

Great story. Need to know if they continue with the loving ways

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I am SO glad you reposted this story, I've always loved it. I thought I was losing my mind a couple weeks back when I couldn't find it anywhere.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Many more chapters to come I hope.

masterkinggodmasterkinggodabout 7 years ago
i want more chapters

you need to add more chapters to this. have him go further with his mother

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great mom-son story

Nice piece of hot fluff!

The comment from Anonymous, though, admitting he can't get it up for a story that doesn't describe the cunt as bald, is a downer. I know, I'm out of the loop that admires bald cunts, pierced faces and tattooed bodies, but - jeez, pal.

Rye and Ginger Ayle

Turtle1952Turtle1952about 7 years ago
fantastic

Unusual story line but it worked very well. You write more to this and explore the desires she has always harboured.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
yep 5 stars

also please make more chapters !!

GingerCat1GingerCat1about 7 years ago
Okay

I liked the premise, I liked the premise a lot and it was well written. I just felt that the story was rather rushed, that things happened too quickly. I would have much preferred a slower build up and with the son being more conflicted with what was going on. Had it been another page longer, I think it would have been an amazing story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Loved it

What a great story. This mother feels self conscious about her body and because of her conservative upbringing feels bad about her sexual thoughts. This loving son helps his mother out. Each day she will feel very beautiful when her son's young cock hardens as he lustfully looks upon his dear mothers naked body. Mommy will feel very beautiful when her son crawls between her thighs and mounts his dear mommy. Paying her the ultimate complement when he deposits his seed deep inside his mothers unprotected and fertile womb. Mom and son can rutt like wild animals until mommy's loving son succeeds in making mommy a mommy again.

homerjayhomerjayabout 7 years ago
5 stars

another triumph! thank you.

boaman007boaman007about 7 years ago
Another winner

Love it perhaps we might see a future installment with these characters? So many directions this could go in and still be a very loving and exciting coupling. Great job.

boaman007@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story teller

I have read some of your stories and they are so imaginative and real to me. So I want to roleplay a story with my wife.

Biguy46Biguy46about 7 years ago
Excellent

This was a great erotica Sexy story.

milk4yallmilk4yallabout 7 years ago
One of the best hypnotizing stories!!

Great to keep it going.

Fred78Fred78about 7 years ago
Clean up

He should have done the same for her!

DeathPrinceDeathPrincealmost 7 years ago
Great

Nice little story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Better than the average tale

I'm not usually satisfied by mother-son stories, but this one was nicely handled. I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Fantastic

I really enjoyed it, well written and just the right amount of sex and excitement for a loving Mother and son. I hope you write more along this line.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5!! GREAT Story. I was wondering

could you write another chapter and tell us how they reacted and performed with each other when they got home?

MalvorMalvorabout 6 years ago
A second Chapter

Please write a second Chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
second chapter

i agree a second chapter is most definitely needed to see how they both react when they get home

hcarr1234hcarr1234about 6 years ago
Great Story

I throughly enjoyed this story. I search many many stories to find a story I enjoy.

MarsPatrolMarsPatrolabout 6 years ago

That was really hot. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good but inconcluse

It was very good, the narrative, the escalation of events, but you left the reader watching a naked woman in a lake, without knowing if she will snap out of trance and return to be the same old, without knowing if she'll need more hypnotherapy, without knowing if they will return home happy, without knowing if she will be able to explore more, like anal, double or triple penetration, nymphomania or if they will become a couple with a pregnancy coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Most excellent!

That was really hot! I love hypnosis stories. I like to be on the receiving end sometime myself.

vladdracul85vladdracul85over 4 years ago
Simply amazing

More chapters

tellmeastory3tellmeastory3about 4 years ago
Exciting

Love the story line of control, perhaps this continues after they return home, behind the back of the father/husband. Enjoyed the story very much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was just too easy for the son. If hypnosis was this easy, everybody would be doing it!

animal99animal99about 2 years ago

Excellent story and I lenjoyed the slow build up to the actual sex act. I agree, a 2nd chapter is due.. perhaps mom enjoying more sex with son, longer and more satisfying because it is unhurried sex, in a safe environment - Making love, at it's best: On her own bed, with someone she trusts who also loves her and adores her body, as it is.

bumblegrumbumblegrumover 1 year ago

Excellent story, as usual. I don’t think I’ve ever read a HeyAll story I didn’t thoroughly enjoy. You write well, with a compact style that draws the reader in quickly and thoroughly. Thank you: five stars, more if they were available.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It was one of the best stories I have read sofar . Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I hate posting under Anonymous. However, with that being said, I love all of your Mother/Son stories. This one in particular is one that I wish I could have done with my own mother.

a_reader_from_germanya_reader_from_germany12 months ago

Should be in "nonconsent/reluctance" or "mindcontrol" if such a category exist. The guy is an asshole for making his mom obey his orders when hypnotising her for the second time. The way the mother behaved during the first hypnosis there was no need to be an asshole, even if the son craved a sexual encounter with his mom. The only thing the author achieved with this twist was to make it impossible for me to identify with this character.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

It would be really great if he cleaned up mother also

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I have previously read this story and it has changed, for the better but not perfect. As always very hot and arousing.. I have always appreciated how as a writer you’re able to get into the story without having to go to extra long writing lengths. I maybe missed it in thisreading but there was something about where they ended up camping and no one was around. Not that important. There plenty more themes to Perdue with this story. I’ll check in. Thanks

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