All Comments on 'I Always Wanted To Be A Cop'

This is off to a great start, Rick. Looking forward to the next installment.

I agree, the story is off to a good start, it is nicely paced and I am certainly looking forward to chapter two. Thank you.

Hope neither of the girls die though

I was happily reading your story... then Chapter one suddenly and most expectantly ended. I have to say though that I have thoroughly enjoyed what I've read so far and look forward to more. Thank you for sharing.

5stars looking forward to the rest

I am eager for more!

to wanna be thief of tax payer dollars

Don't wait too long for the next chapter - I just finished chapter 1 and I can't wait for the next one.

I'm very sad about what will happen next, but I see in advance how your character will have a happy ending. I've made a prediction now I want to see if I will be correct.

VERY GOOD STORY AND I AM SURE NOTHING HAPPENS TO DILUTE THE TEMPO OR QUALITY OF THE STORY IN THE UP COMING CONTINUATION. Will await a good continuation early.

Great so far but lack of chapter 1 in the title does kinda suck. I do hope this tale differs from your previous work, where the wronged man always gets back togeather with the woman who cheated on him due to some unbelievible reconciliation circumstances, that appear out of nowhere.

Looking forward to next chapter or chapters. Thanks for sharing.

It's a very good start but I reserve my rating to see if you finish what you started. One of my pet peeves is that authors don't complete their multiparty stories and leave us hanging. I hope to see more soon.

IT is a wonderful story and non erotic. I enjoyed the explanations. Thank you.

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

One doesn't really swallow their tongue. But nice story.

He checked her airway to see "if she wallowed her tongue."

Googled tongue-swallowing:

A condition in which the tongue tends to fall backward and obstruct the openings to the larynx and esophagus. The tongue is not swallowed and the term is inaccurate; nevertheless, it is occasionally used. The condition is due to excessive flaccidity of the tongue during unconsciousness. Airway control is achieved through one of the following maneuvers: forceful elevation of the chin and extension of the head during artificial respiration, in order to open the airway; or insertion of a mechanical airway device, such as an oropharyngeal airway, to push the tongue out of the airway.

CAUTION!

The rescuer should never place his or her hand inside the victim's mouth to move the tongue.

Great beginning!

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