by Finis
We are being involved smoothly with the central character and there is a lot of mystery as to where it is going.
Anyone interested in providing a detailed review or critique without waiting for Lit to finish posting the series should read this forum post:
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1146071
It is difficult to critique a chapter unless you know how it fits with the entire story. This reads really well. Obviously if it stopped here it would be a great disappointment. So whatever this is leading up to, this chapter continues from the first to build suspense and interest. But seriously, you already know that! Feel kind of lame even commenting, but you deserve to hear how good this is. I hope I can continue to cheer your future chapters.
Getting good with passing chapters. Hope to read it all in once without waiting for lit to update chapters.