All Comments on 'I Bet Her Body'

wish she had been more reluctant...more degraded as the action began

I enjoyed how this was written! All the poker talk and fingering my hole card. I wanted a bit more reluctance too, though. Or maybe for all the guys including her dad to get involved. But that's just me. :) xx

Loved her little admission at the end.

very well written good mix of poker and sex and good fun

54, 863 views. So many men have jizzed to this; this is a story about a Dad watching another male fuck a teen-aged girl, his daughter. I felt like shit when I read this, terrified and hopeless; I start to hate being a woman when I read stories like this because I feel like men want women to be pathetic whores like this kind of male- invented girl character. I hate that this story was written and that it stays up here for others to read.

You know Queenie, you have made comments like this on many stories. Once again on this one you miss the point. Don't you realize that the twist at the end shows that, in fact, the girl was in control the whole time, secretly laughing at the effect she could have on the men with her body? Truly, there are some stories written in ways you would object to for your reasons stated. With a little understanding and perception, you would see that this is not one of them. LOL.

The thing is that not only men look at this site. I loved this story and im a 18 year old girl! Betty's manipulative side makes me think that we have a lot in common as i am also a bit of a slut like that.

Except that i prefer men with dark hair.

This story was very enjoyable and i had my 6th orgasm of the day reading this. Well done ;)

I my opinion NO condom / rubber should have been used

Sarah Leather

Didn't get me off but it was fun to read.

I have never read anything better then that. You had her fear down pact. I believed every bit of it. I also love how you added that bit of daddy daughter to it as well. That was grest. Your writing style was amazing. I'm keeping my eye on you.