All Comments on 'I Break For No Man'

Lots of good new authors today! Excellent set up. You have built up the tension well. I really hope you mean it in the title. I want very much to see her triumph, even if the path is difficult. There are already more than enough stories where she looses in the end.

I love stories where the heroine has escaped and gone into hiding. You just know he's gonna find her eventually and the tension is delicious. Will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Please - follow through with the promise of your title. I echo the prior comment - too many stories where the inevitable outcome is the woman dead in a ditch - Funny how the author never has the courage to show that obvious eventuality - as if that isn't what will happen.

I mean - how many "old" sex slaves are there? Can you imagine - locking up a beautiful young woman - and then keeping her through menopause? Someone should write that story - it could be hilarious.

But you need to edit before posting. You used "I" and "Me" multiple times to refer to the main character which abruptly changed the scene and had me out of the story. This could go wonderful places, but don't rush it without editing.

A great start, but hope that isn't it. Next chapter please.

The story is also yours, so don't be swayed by what the readers want....you just do your thing...

Ps...I do love a strong heroine who kicks ass...:-))